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Moominaba — Nightmare Hall
Published: 2006-10-01 22:45:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description A begining with no end
In a darkened hall they stand
dancing to their morbid band
after taking soul and land

Watching fools that just fall through
Juggling silent morning dew
In somber silence they fit their shoe
their points could never be more true

Spend all day in Nightmare Hall
It's your feast
Have a ball

Step on those that cannot walk
Rip out tounges that cannot talk
Breathing lungs that choke on chalk
Weaker minds they always mock

And reason in revolt now thunders
Time to defeat, their evil plunders
Running from their bare blue hunters
And soon you too become a monster

Dream all life in Nightmare Hall
It's not your life
So take it all
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Comments: 8

ziga [2006-10-03 07:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Lovely.
Once again,
your rhyming is supurb.

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Moominaba In reply to ziga [2006-10-07 18:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much my friend.

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fallingbelow [2006-10-02 15:00:45 +0000 UTC]

thier points could never be more true <---Their

Nice piece interesting idea.

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Moominaba In reply to fallingbelow [2006-10-07 18:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and thank you for pointing out the mistake.

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fallingbelow In reply to Moominaba [2006-10-09 14:17:30 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem.

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prepaidestiny [2006-10-01 22:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Im not sure what it is about this... i like it though... neat.

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Moominaba In reply to prepaidestiny [2006-10-01 22:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Funny thing is I'm not sure what it's about either.
Explenations for the metaphors (or lack thereof) kept running through my head.
But I'm glad you like it.
Thanks for the comment.

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prepaidestiny In reply to Moominaba [2006-10-01 22:55:59 +0000 UTC]

No problem... it was a very cool piece.

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