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Published: 2013-10-15 00:04:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1664; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 0
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Description Art trade with MistySteel <3 of her two oc's Steel and Misty
I'm really happy with the way this turned out after numerous ctrl z's and much fighting with my tablet.
Would love to hear what all you think about this one, it took a couple hours of solid work to pull together.
mistysteel.deviantart.com/

Credits:
NikonGriffin:
Lakela:
JinxMim:
fillyrox:
Colourize-Stock:
Sisterslaughter165:
AlzirrSwanheartStock:alzirrswanheartstock.deviantar…
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Comments: 17

manabuns [2015-11-11 20:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Stunning work! I love the apparent tenderness in this piece.

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arabianrider22 [2013-10-27 16:40:22 +0000 UTC]

This is STUNNING!

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Moonstone-Designs In reply to arabianrider22 [2013-10-28 02:31:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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27GreenStrawberries [2013-10-16 18:29:39 +0000 UTC]

I like the colors and how good the two horses fit together!

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Moonstone-Designs In reply to 27GreenStrawberries [2013-10-16 18:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much <3

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27GreenStrawberries In reply to Moonstone-Designs [2013-10-16 19:08:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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WolfPrint267 [2013-10-15 22:40:24 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful! I love the wings and blue fire on the black pegasus!!!

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Moonstone-Designs In reply to WolfPrint267 [2013-10-16 01:20:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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THE-LUCKIE-CHARM [2013-10-15 02:01:07 +0000 UTC]

CRITIQUE!

I really love this all and all but I see a few problems listed below.


1. The shading isn't exactly right. From where I'm seeing it, it looks like the white peggy is behind the black one and so wouldn't there be a shadow casted along the back of the black from the white's wing? There would also be a lot more shading a long the right side of the black peggy because the light source is coming from the left.

2. The flames don't blend very well with the peggy's mane and feathers. The flame on the front left leg looks a bit weird to me, like it's sorta just floating there or something.

3. The black horn looks a little odd, with the shading and stuff. There would be more shadows than highlights from the view point instead of it just being the highlights on top and shadows on bottom. I would also make it look like it's a spiral horn, much like the white peggy's. c:


Beautifully done and keep up the good work! <3 - Clo. c:

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Moonstone-Designs In reply to THE-LUCKIE-CHARM [2013-10-15 02:04:12 +0000 UTC]

<3 thanks so much

This was my first attempt at fire/flames XD There is much work to be done to improve.

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THE-LUCKIE-CHARM In reply to Moonstone-Designs [2013-10-15 02:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Well, from what I've seen in your gallery, you've been improving a lot. <3

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Moonstone-Designs In reply to THE-LUCKIE-CHARM [2013-10-15 02:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Been doing a lot of practice

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mistysteel [2013-10-15 01:50:35 +0000 UTC]

wow awesome! I love it! great stock choices

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Moonstone-Designs In reply to mistysteel [2013-10-15 01:56:33 +0000 UTC]

so glad you like it <3

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Sisterslaughter165 [2013-10-15 00:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is so beautiful, dear! Thanks a lot for using our stock!

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Moonstone-Designs In reply to Sisterslaughter165 [2013-10-15 00:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3 That means a lot

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Sisterslaughter165 In reply to Moonstone-Designs [2013-10-15 09:52:02 +0000 UTC]

Of nothing, dear!

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