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manabuns [2015-11-11 20:31:32 +0000 UTC]
Stunning work! I love the apparent tenderness in this piece.
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arabianrider22 [2013-10-27 16:40:22 +0000 UTC]
This is STUNNING!
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27GreenStrawberries [2013-10-16 18:29:39 +0000 UTC]
I like the colors and how good the two horses fit together!
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WolfPrint267 [2013-10-15 22:40:24 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful! I love the wings and blue fire on the black pegasus!!!
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THE-LUCKIE-CHARM [2013-10-15 02:01:07 +0000 UTC]
CRITIQUE!
I really love this all and all but I see a few problems listed below.
1. The shading isn't exactly right. From where I'm seeing it, it looks like the white peggy is behind the black one and so wouldn't there be a shadow casted along the back of the black from the white's wing? There would also be a lot more shading a long the right side of the black peggy because the light source is coming from the left.
2. The flames don't blend very well with the peggy's mane and feathers. The flame on the front left leg looks a bit weird to me, like it's sorta just floating there or something.
3. The black horn looks a little odd, with the shading and stuff. There would be more shadows than highlights from the view point instead of it just being the highlights on top and shadows on bottom. I would also make it look like it's a spiral horn, much like the white peggy's. c:
Beautifully done and keep up the good work! <3 - Clo. c:
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Moonstone-Designs In reply to THE-LUCKIE-CHARM [2013-10-15 02:04:12 +0000 UTC]
<3 thanks so much
This was my first attempt at fire/flames XD There is much work to be done to improve.
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THE-LUCKIE-CHARM In reply to Moonstone-Designs [2013-10-15 02:32:28 +0000 UTC]
Well, from what I've seen in your gallery, you've been improving a lot. <3
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Sisterslaughter165 [2013-10-15 00:14:42 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This is so beautiful, dear! Thanks a lot for using our stock!
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