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Published: 2012-07-14 02:09:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 874; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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My first shoot with Kelly!Comments welcomed!
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Marvelous outfit, superb take, lovely pose, congrats !!!
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I love this one. Great pose, awesome natrual light, beautiful composition. Follows the "rule" of 3rds very well.. I love the look of your model too. The only thing I would change is maybe tighten the shot up just a tiny tiny bit, and I mean tiny! You can still maintain this composition but zoomed in a hair more. I see your shooting with a crop sensored DSLR, to bring in that tightness I was talking about, try leaving your zoom set at 35mm and use your feet to zoom and compose your shots. You will still be able to open up to f/4 like this photo was shot at. 35mm is considered a standard lens for your camera because it is the best representation of what the human eye will natrually see! Try it out and keep up these beautiful photos!
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Thank you.
I am self taught, so all your input is welcomed!
There is a lot of trial and error in my portraits, but it is the direction I want to work in.
So feel free to comment more!
Thanks again.. I will work on it!
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I think that this is the best one as the pose of the model is elegant, the "pouf" of the dress adds some softenss and round shape and the graffiti in the background brings to mind one of those old fashioned velvet "chaise longues" in it's sort of fanned shape.
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Thanks. This is one of my Fav's.
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Glad we agree on this one!
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I think we generally agree. 
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Absolutely, which is why I do try to comment as much as possible. I know that it really helps. So please do comment on my work as well! I know I've not done much lately due to the workload, but comments are always very much appreciated.
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And I will... I watch a ton of people, in all aspects of photography and I get buried in photos as well, so I understand.
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