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"Oh shit...there goes the planet."
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Me:she is the queen of darkness take up arms
Sora:*shows picture*
Me:AWWWWWWWWWW!
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I swear, she really reminds me a LOT of Bowser Koopa Jr. Just imagine this dialogue:
Amora: "Leave my Daddy alone, you horrible Ponies! I won't let you take him away!"
(Long, drawn out, uncomfortable silence as the ponies and Shining Armor (who is tied up) looked disbelieving)
Shining Armor: "I'm sorry-- I'm your what?!"
Amora: "Yeah, Mommy told me all about it. She told me my Daddy got kidnapped by that awful pink princess so I came to rescue him!"
(The ponies still look at her shocked/disbelieving)
Rainbow Dash: "... Kid, are you kidding?"
Amora: "No, I'm not! Mommy told me everything. She said,(mocking Chrysalis' voice) 'The ponies are a bunch of bullies, they never fight fair and the mean, jealous pink princess put Daddy under a spell to make him fall in love with her!' You're a bad, bad mare! And you're ugly too. (She runs over and hugs Shining Armor) And I'm not gonna let you steal my Daddy again!"
Shining armor: "[link] "
Amora: "Now stop following us and leave my family alone!"
(Magicks away with Shining Armor, or whatever it's called, leaving the other dumbstruck and silent)
Cadance: "... WHAT THE BUCK IS GOING ON?" [link]
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Some one told her that her father is Shining Armor, he and Chrysalis her mother were about to get married and live happily ever after but a jealous pink unicorn princess throw her away and put a spell on his father into believing that she was his only and true love.
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I'm guessing that someone is Chrysalis.
Wow... so she's basically emotionally manipulating her daughter and will ultimately break her heart when she finds out the truth, and I must ask, for what? Is Chrysalis so heartless is amused her to lie straight to her daughter's face that her father is Shining Armor.
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Her life was ... complicated.
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Wow.
Fluttershy: (to Chrysalis) Oh... you are a bad, bad mother.
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But ... if Shining Armor isn't the father ... then who is ?
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I don't know. It's up to Mr-Samson, really.
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And who would that someone be?
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What's with the crazy amount of cuteness in this picture? Are you trying to kill us?
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I always knew that Chrysalis was actually in love with Shining Armor.
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Outside the Changeling Princess' playroom, a dramatic event is unfolding.
A Night Guard, dressed in enchanted camoflarge armour, emerged from the shadows, creeping towards the unsuspecting Changeling princess's play chamber. Two other night guards, a unicorn and an earthpony, emerged out of the shadows with him. He whisper down the microphone, in their guards' silent code "Team Alpha, in position."
On the other corridor, another Night Guard team was just finished disposing the corpses of two praetorian Changeling guards they had killed, blood and ichor from their slited throats lacing their coats and equipment, "Team Beta, in position." the female lead called.
"Team Gamma, on overwatch," a third voice called from the phone, crispy and deep, a veteran's voice.
"Alright, Operation Sandpony is a go." A fourth voice ordered. It was male, rather young, but carried authority and weight in its tone, that, and a bit of simmering anger. "You have another ten minutes to sedate the package and get out, before the rest of those guards' shift change is over. Report progress every five minutes, and make sure you have that bug secured and ready for extraction, at all costs."
"Understood." The three team leaders affirmed.
"Should we really be doing this? I mean, we're going to kidnap a child here." One of the night guards in Team Beta asked, scanning through the bedchamber's doors with a scrying spell. Behind the walls, the Changeling princess was playing fondly with figures resembling Princess Cadence, Shining Armour and her own mother in front of a picture of Canterlot. Save for her crooked horn, black carapace, membranous mane and tail, the resemblance with a normal pony filly was just too close for comfort.
"Hush," Team Beta's leader told her, "This is not any normal child. This is the heir of the Changeling Empire. And nobody's going to know - not even the Princesses. This is pure black ops. Just remember that and do your job; we have gone too far to mess up now."
She took a look at her watch. At twelve midnight, the Changeling guards downstairs with change shifts, and the window will open for them to get out in ten minutes time the same way they spent half an hour to sneak through. Too many things can go wrong, but it must be done. It will be done.
Few seconds left now. Four... three... two... one...
"Initiate!"
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NEW FAN FICTION IDEA!
A group of secret agents eliminate a nest of changlings, without the knowledge of the princess, but miss one filly changling queen. The princesses find out, and the changling has to be raised. By someone. The main six is overdone, so why not at the doorstep of some grouchy mare?
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Can I just ask something mate, I know this was a long time ago, but in this rp, I remember you pretty much fully demonized Shining Armor, along with this Dr Scyph, to the point even Adolf Hitler would be telling him, "Dude, chill out." If just for the sake of catharsis and closure - I remember you tell me he would face a lot of consequences for his actions - could you tell me what those consequences would be?
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You want to write a follow up? Stripped of rank/status, put on trial, probably locked up in a mental ward or something. It's usually how it goes.
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Eh, just more interested in the knowledge of knowing since that you were the one who started it off.
I mean, don't get me wrong, this was a long time ago and if I recall correctly, you have expressed a kinda regret in portraying the ponies and characters like Shining this way. But for me... I just need a sense of closure and catharsis.
This is what a LOT of 'mean ponies to changelings' fics lack. When so much effort is put into making Shining and the ponies SO blood-boilingly despicable and monstrous (which is really confusing considering how much you're against the changelings, yet you make the ponies even worse), then the lest that could be done is give the author a sense of justice be punishing them and PUNISHING THEM HARD. In a lot of fics, it's simply "oh, we're all friends now, right? Sorry about all that us trying to murder you that even the Nazis would think we're going overboard. Friends now? ... hey, where you going?" And THAT IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME. It'd be the same thing if Changelings or griffins did the same to them and there was no pay-off.
I know how to hurt Shining Armor - have Cadance and Twilight utterly reject him and Cadance throw the ring is his face telling him "marrying you was the biggest mistake of my life! We're through!" But the thing is... I feel like I shouldn't have to want that.
I feel so bad for Shining Armor in the show and fanfiction because he is utterly screwed no matter what happens. TIn the show, he's hated because of how bland and shoe-horned in he was, and in fanfiction, he's so utterly monstrofied that it taints many people's view of him. He's either a bland generic nice guy or a blood-craving Nazi who happily hurts children. Even the Royal Guard and pony soldiers get screwed in the ass like this; they're never allowed to be ordinary guys just doing their job, they ALWAYS have to be murderous, crazed sadists. And... for what? It doesn't give Shining Armor or the guards anymore depth than they don't have; it's foul-tasting Character Derailment and when compared to the show, makes him look even worse and shallow.
I'm sorry, it's just... somebody give Shining Armor and the Changelings a break.
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I mean, it's a nice, sweet little picture, and then you drop that on us, why to bring down the mood, man.
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I was also practicing. I think I would switch to something different from now on.
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Man... why you gotta do that? Why do you gotta write reply stories with sadistic pony soldiers killing or kidnapping Changeling children? I mean, it's not the first.
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Yeah, I guess I liked that too much.
I had a bit of stigma with bugs.
Sorry about that.
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Nah, it's cool.
By the way, now that I';ve finished my littlest pet shop oneshot, Space Monkey, I can now get back to work on Maternal Instinct, where, heh heh, let's just say... an influential, mystical Changeling enters the story.
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(Nice omake, and yes--regarded your comment on my page--she IS cute. X3 And now for my response...)
By the time Beta Leader had gotten to the "a" in "initiate", the camouflaged ponies had already made their move. Her squad quickly slinked up to the open back door and into the playroom, sticking to whatever shadows they could find and not saying a word. They were the definition of stealth; the little Changeling never even looked up from her playing, only humming a little tune as she brought the figures of Princess Cadence and Queen Chrysalis to her chest for a hug.
The reluctant Night Guard felt his chest tighten at the sight of her; so small and happy and...innocent. Why don't the Princesses know about this? What will...happen to her?
He'd barely finished that thought before the front door opened, creaking ever so slightly.
This was it.
The Changeling Princess looked up at the door. "Hmm? Who is...what? N-no..." Terror crept into her voice as the three-pony Alpha Team rushed into the room, quickly surrounding her. The unicorn among them produced a syringe from somewhere, levitating it in a silvery glow of magic.
The Beta Night Guard wasn't sure why, but he could have sworn that Alpha Team all looked like they were smiling under their masks. "C'mere, sweetheart; I have a treat for you," the unicorn hissed in a low voice.
She brandished the needle, the stainless-steel tip flashing as it caught the light.
The Changeling Princess bolted away, dropping her toys as she made for the back door--and the waiting Beta Team.
It was then that time crept to a snail's pace by everypony's attuned perceptions. Tears streamed down the little Changeling's muzzle, glinting like little prisms as they fell from her face.
Beta Team's unicorn Guard cast a red bolt from her horn that struck the young creature dead in her throat and cut of her cry of Mommy! like somepony muting a radio.
Realizing that she was cornered, the now-mute, weeping Princess made a desperate about-face, hoping to run between the horrible attackers on her tail--
...But she found herself immobile when an unforgiving pair of hooves seized her from behind, allowing Alpha Team to close on her.
The Earth pony was young by Night Guard standards--twenty-nine. But he had still seen his share of action, both covert and overt in his time in the Night Guard.
At this moment, holding a flailing, quivering Changeling--no, child against her will, as Alpha's unicorn member gleefully injected her with a cocktail of knockout drugs, and watching the child silently scream and wail for mercy---all of that meant nothing. He was a rookie again, a green-as-grass new-blood on his first real patrol.
As the drugs took effect and the little Changeling's struggles slackened and finally ceased, he thanked Celestia he couldn't see her face. He couldn't imagine living with himself if he truly knew how much terror she felt, and that he was the cause of it.
Their "package" twitched one last time, and the moment passed. He was a veteran again.
Alpha's unicorn twirled the syringe and pocketed it. "The brat's out. Let's get the buck out of here before the rest of her babysitters get here."
Beta Leader gave a curt nod and keyed her microphone. "Beta Leader to all units; Diamondback-Actual. Package is sedated; repeat, package. Is. Sedated. Proceeding to exfil point."
She laid the unconscious Changeling across her back, snugly tying her down with a spare strap she had packed for just that purpose. "All of you, move it."
With that, the assembled ponies slipped out of the room, silent as the grave.
As they made their exit, Beta Team's young Earth Pony spared a glance at their quarry atop his leader's back, and felt his chest tighten once more.
I'm sorry, kid...
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Cicada woke up from her bad dream. What had it been about again? Her being . . . an adult male pony? A bad pony who wanted to hurt Princess Monarch. What a bad and silly dream, she'd never do anything to hurt her best friend in the whole wide swarm! Not her or any of her friends!
For a long time the Queen had denied her child any sort of playmates. Queen Chrysalis said it was so her daughter would always know how special she was, though it was mostly to keep her from developing attachments, empathy, sympathy, and all those others things that Chrysalis felt a ruler shouldn't have need for.
Now Princess Monarch had several new playmates! Cicada had been Princess Monarch's friend and playmate as long as could remember. And Queen Chrysalis made it clear it was their job to not only keep the Princess happy, but to protect her too from any bad ponies who might try again to take her from her. Again? Oh well, Cicada didn't care, she was a changeling nymphling, it was her duty, even one so small, to obey her Queen.
"You have a bad dream Cicada?" Monarch asked, Cicada's sisters fluttering around her in concern too, all of them just a tiny bit smaller than the little princess. They were all the same age, they been hatched together, and were united in their duty, and pleasure, in keeping Monarch happy and safe.
"Don't worry Monarch, it wasn't anything." And it wasn't anything, she'd never let a dream get in the way of her friendship with her princess, if anything, it encouraged her to make sure such a bad dream never came true.
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(Why yes, I AM an evil bastard.)
Princess Luna made one final check--the dream was stable now. The little Changeling would now be in her own private world, one based on her own memories...but with certain details changed, for the better.
It was the least the child deserved.
With a wave of magic, she exited Princess Cicada's mind and returned to the waking world.
To the laboratory of one Professor Death Scythe.
"Thank you, Princess. It will do us some good if the subject isn't lucid for this next batch of tests." The grey unicorn announced, leafing through some notes on a clipboard. With a slight sneer she mumbled, "Little brat can scream like a banshee...."
Luna went rigid at the scientist's callousness, but held her tongue. "I apologize for her behavior. The little one probably isn't accustomed to being a military lab-rat," she answered.
Scythe just shrugged. "Well, too bad for her. Thank you again, Princess; now that that...distraction has been dealt with, our work can proceed in earnest. This little brat will be quite useful--we're just on the cusp of something fantastic, you know. Soon Equestria need not fear anyone--not Changelings, not Griffins, not Dragons...none of them."
Scythe's blue eyes seemed alight with the prospect. It reminded Luna of a Windego.
Luna was silent for a moment, then she leaned down towards Scythe. "I hope so, Doctor. If this...nightmare isn't worth it in the end, you will face serious consequences."
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Luna saw something, somepony else being wheeled in, already sedated. Her eyes widened.
"Who is that?"
"Who is what?"
"The filly on that table!"
"Oh! Just some no-face orphan we found in some backwater town with no home that no pony will ever miss. We need to do some side by side comparisons for our data to be accurate. We need to figure out what'll harm a non-pony but not harm a pony after all."
'Did you really think she'd stop with experiments on Changelings Luna?' The Night Princess heard her own thoughts taunt her.
Sedated and restrained, Scootaloo was in a black deep dreamless sleep.
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( What do you think you've done?)
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(Chain of events in this had led to innocent character being harmed. Make that two, including the Princess.
The character Death Scythe was to show that not even gentle creatures like ponies are not barred from sinking to the darkest depravity. EVERY creature that could think
Looks like I had succeeded, with him going at it towards its ultimately logical conclusion
Again, I ask myself, what have I done? Have my stinck of liking and writing grim and dark go too far? Had my cynicism reaches its peak?)
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(Ouch. That was...grim.)
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Forced to face a reality where if you don't put morality-restraints on research and science that unequinity will inevitable follow?
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(No story reply? And Deathscythe is wrong about no one missing her.)
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(Story reply will come later. I've got some housework to do. 
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(Congrats.
But the whole idea was that Cicada was the new name the Night Guard black ops was given after being mutated into a changeling nymphling. And Monarch was the name of the princess, which was supposed to be IRONIC given she's a princess and yet her name is Monarch (like a monarch butterfly.)
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Oh!
That went completely over my head.
Nicely done; with that in mind I actually think your post is the better one.
Cruel irony and all that.
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