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Mr-Wang ā WSW Contest Entry: Scarlet Christmas
Published: 2012-12-24 10:11:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 4069; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 17
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I spent a great many of hours working on this. Lighting, shadows, perspective stretches, and more, I don't know if this is the most time I've ever spent on a Walfas comic. By now I've pretty much gained a reputation for my editing skills, so I guess I don't want to disappoint, do I? Hopefully this comic either impressed you, made you go "aww" or earned your vote. Any of those is fine for me.Merry Christmas, everybody.
Note: After seeing some initial reactions, I have to ask... Do you think I try a bit too hard? I feel like I tried too hard to win, and my editing skills might take precedence over my story-telling in judging. Some people might be marveled, others will be like "How the hell do I compete against that?!" I'm going on a slight guilt trip here. Is it just me...?
Portrait and window props courtesy of
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I think the room where resides the party needs more light.
This is not a critique at all. It's just that, I feel pity to those people with nothing lighter than this lamp.
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I love how rude Patchouli is, cause that's her actual canon self
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YOU DO NOT TRY TO HARD! even though the contest is long gone over. XD
Also, love how Remui brought her donation box. XD
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Wow, Iām not the type of guy that says that something won before the results come, but I think that even my previous entry would have a hard time toping how well made this was. And the feelings in it, you can feel them, literally.
You have won ATLEAST one trophy in this one Mr.Wang, And a Well-deserved trophy.
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Thing is, I think most of the dazzle and appeal of my comics is the amount of editing that goes into it, but I know there are other comics that actually tell a better story. Yours is a good one, GreenJake, don't let anything tell you otherwise.
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Holy hell, this should be put in an art museum!!!
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This is a good comic and damn did you put in the work. Also, I am really digging that last panel!
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Erm... I'm not interpreting that as a good reaction. As in, you pondering "How the hell do I compete with this?!" or something.
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I've felt kinda bad after posting this because I know 90% of the wow-factor is in the editing, not the storytelling, and without it the rest of the comic is sorta just okay. Especially when I know some other comics might be telling better stories, just lacking in all the lighting edits and whatnot.
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I seriously loved the last panel so much, I made a song about it! XD
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Wait, wait, wait, a song...? Seriously? Or just kinda expressing your whimsical enjoyment of the image?
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It's not a very good one, but I did make a song about it (-_-)
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And it's for comics LIKE THIS. That I think you deserve all the Pageviews I get, Mr. Wang.
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No Mystia! Don't runaway towards Yuyuko...
Oh wait... the cupcake is for Youmu... Um,... don't eat the cupcake Yuyuko...
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It was actually meant for Yuyuko, but I can see the confusion too.
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That picture is of Yukari, and it wasn't made by me, it was . I'm just probably the only person besides him who's used the custom prop he's made.
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Oh, mai god. You deserve a medal, with a nine on it, to prove you have the strongest of feels
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!!!
HOLY SHNIKEYS!!!
Dynamics lighting, 3d winsows, cute story, and one downright amazing final panel. There's a LOT of work put into this, and it shows.
Wow, wow, wow, wow. Consider the bar for Walfas comics raised, and you raised it.
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