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ArtCrusade [2011-02-10 06:00:22 +0000 UTC]
Pretty original, I like it! But next time, get rid of the text on the floor. I kinda dislike the pavement's texture as well.
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MrJumpManV4 In reply to ArtCrusade [2011-02-10 06:27:40 +0000 UTC]
yes. as do i. unfortunately the render is 14 hours...
check out the deployed tank model though, it doesn't have any pavement or text.
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Great-5 [2011-02-09 21:15:25 +0000 UTC]
Good to see it rendered and textured!
An electric tank? That's a pretty cool first.
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KayKove [2011-02-09 00:28:03 +0000 UTC]
i would suggest that in your next render you lose the title on the ground and just do a subtle 2D title block in the corner of the image in Photoshop or something. Also maybe make a simple bump map to put some expansion gaps (effectively just panel lines) in the concrete material to make it look less like a giant, infinite extrusion. Unless you want it that way. Just something to break up all that flat surface, like the vents in the embankments at ground level. In other news, I didn't notice until now that the entire "hull" turns instead of just the gun. That is severely cool - I'd love to see some of these in an RTS, Company Of Heroes style.
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MrJumpManV4 In reply to KayKove [2011-02-09 02:26:17 +0000 UTC]
As for the bump map, i agree, along with the title. the "primary" hull is actually below the turret, the turret just contains the cockpit along with the cannon, and is quite a bit bigger than the other hull. but yea i think i have a little bit more work to do.
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