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MudPuddIe In reply to jayfeathersenpai [2017-10-19 05:29:08 +0000 UTC]
The lighting here as well as the background are things that have been pointed out actually, and I totally agree I need to work on both aspects! owo
As for the anatomy, it can be tricky when working with a species that isn't realistic. I know the eyes were a bit too large, but I was working off an actual image, and the anatomy looked a little weird there too if that's any indication.
Nevertheless. Thank you so much for the critique! I will keep all this in mind as I move forward!
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jayfeathersenpai In reply to MudPuddIe [2017-11-02 03:36:49 +0000 UTC]
i totally agree with unrealistic species, just keep practicing the bone structure to keep everything n proportions~~
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Martith [2017-10-19 01:56:03 +0000 UTC]
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Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I'm soo impressede by your skill here. You've managed to catch the theme very conviniently. The overall atmosphere is delightfully dark and mysterious, just like the theme suggests. The pink flame over the character's head looks very believable. Character is proportional, a bit creepy - in good way - and also is very close to a realistic looking creature that you'd be afraid to meet in the darkness e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>
I especially like the colors you chose. Sticking to the purple-blueish color palette was a good idea for this topic. The bright eyes and the flame are excellent - they stand out from the dark, emphasizing the uncanny nature of the artwork.
The reason behind the 4,5 rating of technique are the little mistakes, that if fixed, could make this painting deservedly epic. Background is maybe a bit too dark - the character merge too strongly with the darkness behind it. Also the pink flame, for being so intense, should leave more afterglow on the closest elements, like top of the horns, forehead and ears. There should be also a bit more glow on the shoulers, right next to the border of the painting, so it could easily help the character to pop out from the background.
Overally, I'm amazed by the amount of improvement you show with every new painting. The fact that with all your strength and humility you have challenged yourself into creating in realistic style, despite feeling dissatisfied by your previous attempts, shows how strong-willed and talented artist you are. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="60" title="Clap"/>
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MudPuddIe In reply to Martith [2017-10-19 05:16:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh Martith. Thank you so much.
I really appreciate every word you put into this, even the things I need to improve on. I have never actually gotten a real critique like this before and I can say I appreciate it deeply!
Seriously. Thank you for taking the time to write this out!!!
I will keep each word in mind as I move forward with my art!
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Martith In reply to MudPuddIe [2017-10-19 05:20:48 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad you like my critique! I'm a critique noob haha but it was a pleasure <3 I know you'll improve greatly and that you will be able to create even more incredible artworks <3 and critiques without showing the negative stuff are not really critiques, so ya know... obligatory xD
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MudPuddIe In reply to Martith [2017-10-19 05:36:22 +0000 UTC]
Love it. Seriously I really love when people take the time to tell me what's great and not so great about my work. I love it even more when I can actually see what they mean when they say something, which I could for sure here. I can't wait to be able to work on more realistic pieces!
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MudPuddIe In reply to Greywolf-169 [2017-10-19 22:39:58 +0000 UTC]
Goodness. Thank you <3333 It warms my soul to see such kind comments on this one.
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soft-blues [2017-10-19 02:41:25 +0000 UTC]
MID
MID
THIS IS SO AWESOME??? THE DARK BACKGROUND MAKES THE CHARACTER STAND OUT AND THE EXPRESSION IS FULL OF MEANING
THE PAINTING IS DONE AMAZINGLY AND JSKXC I LOVE THISS
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MudPuddIe In reply to soft-blues [2017-10-19 05:37:50 +0000 UTC]
BLUE
B L U E
YOU ARE SO AWESOME???? THIS COMMENT IS GREAT.
MAKES THIS DAY STAND OUT AND THE
CAPS MAKE THIS COMMENT FULL OF MEANING.
YOUR KINDNESS IS SO AMAZINGLY HELPFUL AND I JUST
LOVE ITTTT
Seriously though. Thank you. It makes my day to see comments like this.
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Martith [2017-10-19 01:30:57 +0000 UTC]
WOOOAH you're pimping up your drawing skills pretty well! Lemme smash the critique for ya <3
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MudPuddIe In reply to Martith [2017-10-19 01:33:03 +0000 UTC]
Ahh. Thank you! I don't usually draw like this, but I needed to vent out all my feelings on art so I was like. Imma go realistic yeah. I know the eyes are a bit too big for realism by the way hah. I had to make them bigger because they looked odd?
Can't wait to read le critiqueeee!
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1Gin-Okami [2017-10-19 00:57:24 +0000 UTC]
That looks amazing! I like the purple flame!
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