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Published: 2015-12-11 00:43:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1492; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 3
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Description Something I'll never finish. I wanted to make a yuri comic but I'll just put bits and pieces on here.
I'll tell you my story idea on here since it will never get finished. This girl is Rapunzel.

Story: Part one
It started with a kiss. Sleeping Beauty (her name is Talia from the original) is put to sleep for
1000 years. She is to be known as the 1000 year princess in the story. Rapunzel (I call her Rapi)
escapes from her prison to search for this 1000 year princess that she read about in her books. She thinks of her as
a kindred spirit and wants to meet her really badly. Rapi finally reaches sleeping beauty's castle and makes it into the castle.
She is amazingly unharmed from the roses thorns which instantly kills people it scratches. Her healing abilities make it impossible for her to die.
She makes it to the room where Sleeping Beauty is and is happy and sad to see her. She kisses her and it wakes her from her sleep. Talia is shocked
where she is and is now and is now technically a orphan. (Everyone died from the spell) Rapunzel tells her story and is very scared to be taken back to her prison. They team up together and try to leave the castle but not before the fairy's that watched over Talia show her a sword in the courtyard covered in thorns and roses. (Sword perhaps called rose sword or sword of truth from Disney) Talia pulls the sword out and is granted power to protect Rapunzel from harm. (The sword I think should able to come from her body)

Story: Part two
The two girls travel together and get to know more about one another. They come across bandits and other
characters from German fairy tales (so little mermaid isn't included). Talia begins to have dreams of herself in
walking in dark forests to see a giant lake in front of her. A cloaked figure rises from the dark waters to try and take her. 
She is able to escape the figure by using her sword. She wakes up from her dreams and begins to realize that her dreams are
trying to warn her of the dark future. She wants to know who this dark figure is? Rapunzel worries for her because the dreams
are becoming worse. They promise to protect each other. Not just Talia protecting Rapi. One night Rapi is off taking a bath and Talia is keeping
watch a girl (Little Red Riding Hood) appears demands her to come with her. The girl thinks she's Rapi and Talia refuses to go with her. They
fight each other and Talia is knocked out. Little Red Riding Hood takes her with her in the night.

Story: Part three
Talia is delivered to a dark queen and is still unconscious when handed over. The Queen is very angry with Little Red because she had gotten
the wrong girl. She decides to manipulate Talia when she wakes up to get to Rapi. Talia tells her story to the Queen and the Queen 
begins to feel a special connection between them. The queen shows Talia her castle and gardens. Talia get's curious about the dungeon and goes down to it hoping there
will be some sort of escape. Talia discovers a mirror that shows her Rapi. Talia is a little freaked out and the Queen appears to get her to talk about Rapi.
Talia refuses and this of course angers the Queen. The Queen tries to have her way with her and ultimately gets stabbed in the heart by Talia's sword. Talia freaks
 out and runs away and makes it out of the castle.
The Queen rises from the ground like nothing happened. The mirror asks if she is alright. Kind of jokingly. The Queen gets up and a twisted smile is placed on her lips.
"I'm alright, after all I have no heart too speak of."
If you don't know who this evil queen is it's none other than Snow White. Also the reason why she doesn't know where Rapi is because either because of Talia's sword or some other item.
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That's what I got so far. Got tired of writing...
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Comments: 5

blackstarlight17 [2015-12-11 01:45:43 +0000 UTC]

You should try making this comic at some point, it sounds like it'd have a ton of potential

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muffin-mixer In reply to blackstarlight17 [2015-12-11 02:08:54 +0000 UTC]

I already have too many comics so I'm just putting some pictures up from what I drew. But thanks

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blackstarlight17 In reply to muffin-mixer [2015-12-11 02:22:10 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okay, still, it might not hurt to try once you've gotten your other comics done and need something new to do.

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muffin-mixer In reply to blackstarlight17 [2015-12-11 02:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. But it's just my comics never get done XD

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blackstarlight17 In reply to muffin-mixer [2015-12-11 02:25:27 +0000 UTC]

They will and then you'll be surprised

I know because I sometimes get the feeling for certain fanfics and such I've been working on for a long time

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