EelRock [2018-04-22 02:26:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed this piece, because it is really good. This is probably your most complex piece yet, as it shows good depth in the interaction between silvally and nihlego. The nihlego is done especially well, with the shading giving appropriate depth, and the tentacles having correct perspective. There are really only two things that I'd like to point out. Silvally's back leg doesn't seem to sit on the same plane as the forelegs. It seems to be a little too tilted away from the viewer. This could probably be solved by showing less of the toes from the front, and instead show them the top. Experiment with the perspective a little bit. As for the scarf, I'm unsure if that is supposed to be a logo, or fan-requested mega stone. (it looks similar to one) If it is a stone, you will need to alter the shading to give it a spherical look. Seeing as how perspective tends to be your most reoccurring issue (as it is for everyone), if you don't mind, I would like to recommend the book Perspective Made Easy by Robbie Lee. Its a great book that introduced me to some of the techniques that can be used for perspective drawings. Other than that the shading is still good, and the pattern on the scarf is well done. Good Work!
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Mysticwaffle032 In reply to EelRock [2018-04-22 22:08:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the very in depth critique! ^_^ I'll check out that book and maybe post some stuff into my scraps about it. I knew that I could only go so without practicing the fundamentals more so I guess I'll start now -^- Thanks for the feedback :>
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