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Nakama — Crossroad
Published: 2005-05-01 15:52:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 104; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description I stop, my breath catching
my heart stopping
destiny pulling
and my soul stalling
just what am I doing
left or right?
I can't chase away these feelings
the feeling of fear
the feeling of spite
that I'll never get this right
and then I chose my path
hoping to find a happy end
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Comments: 6

lizard168 [2005-06-07 00:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Whoa...i'm a poet msyelf....it's great!!!! I really like it...if u have the time (and if u like poetry at all) than u can check out my profile...please *puppy eyes*!

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Nakama In reply to lizard168 [2005-06-07 01:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Of course I will! And thank you so much for the nice comment/comments!

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lizard168 In reply to Nakama [2005-06-07 19:04:24 +0000 UTC]

its my pleasure!

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Red-Isabell [2005-05-02 02:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow Rachel, that's really good! Seriously, I didn't know you wrote poetry.

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Nakama In reply to Red-Isabell [2005-05-03 00:51:44 +0000 UTC]

That's because I don't, but thanks for the favorite!!

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Red-Isabell In reply to Nakama [2005-05-03 04:27:38 +0000 UTC]

Certainly

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