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Published: 2003-10-28 00:10:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 459; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 33
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There are many things in life,That I want to understand,
Like how it feels inside of you,
When I hold your hand,
Do I still fill you with joy?
And make you feel warm inside?
Are the moments we spend still special?
Or have they gone and died?
How does it feel when I hold you?
Are the feelings of love still there?
Am I still the one you want?
To give your love and care?
Although we’ve been through a lot of change,
I’d like you to understand,
That I am at my happiest with you,
When walking hand in hand.
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Cheers mate, yeh I did. Straight from the heart! Thanks again!
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A beautiful piece of poetry there, full of emotion. A feeling most of us are certain to have (or have had) at least once in our life. Also, the accentuation of the bold words forming the main theme sentance of the poem is a really nice contribution to the layout of the poem. Well done
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awesome, i luv it. fave deff. dunno wat it is, but i can really relate to it. dont ask how, i just can! nice one. kate. x
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Thank you very much! It is much appreciated!
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Oh, this is sweet... It's funny, I duno if I'm the only one who noticed, but the bold words form what the poem itself is basically about.. I always look at that... "Do you still feel love" .. This is a really well written bit, even if you were drunk.
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Thank god for spell check on MS Word LOL! Thank you for noticing!
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god i know that feeling, a little too well, great poem
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as always mate this is a great piece!! is there anything that your not actualy good at, you lucky sod!! hope it all works out for the best mate!!
Bry.
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