AdirianSoan [2007-07-22 08:29:33 +0000 UTC]
Hurrah!
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Oleksandr [2006-06-18 01:36:03 +0000 UTC]
The theme is nice. I understand it to be "Altruism is bad, m'kay". Am I right? I liked it overall, though the line "And the kindly man tried to save him-" stands out by breaking the flow. I think once this is resolved, your work will become much better. Getting to the level of awesomeness of "My Cross."