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Natty354 β€” Improvement Meme 2

Published: 2012-08-08 21:43:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 4351; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 38
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Description I know I did one already but I wanted to REALLY redo this particular picture I did almost 4 years ago.

What was I thinking with this one?! What was wrong with he shoulder?! did she dislocated it?!

So for my updated picture, I gave her a bandage to joke about how I fixed her arm

Enjoy

Me and Twigz both went through our old work and decided to redraw our old drawings.

Here is hers

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AberrantWendigo [2012-08-10 17:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Major improvment, man. Lookin' good, (and kinda hot too.) XD

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ARCANUM-ORDER [2012-08-09 23:51:22 +0000 UTC]

Dat shoulder.

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Jai-DeeW [2012-08-09 03:28:47 +0000 UTC]

You have come a long way! congratz!

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Rainydaysmiles [2012-08-08 23:50:42 +0000 UTC]

There is certainly a lot of improvement between the two!
There are some areas you can still improve on. Fingers don't get skinny in the middle and then bulge out like that. They're more or less straight with slight variation where the knuckles are. Also, you have your light source coming from the right of the girl, yet with the sun setting right behind her like that, she should be back lit.
Keep on practicing! You're doing good so far!

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Natty354 In reply to Rainydaysmiles [2012-08-09 00:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

Oh yeah, hands have been my number one enemy for as long as I can remember. One day I'll get it right haha.

As for the lighting, I have no idea what I was thinking really. I did the shading first before any type of background and then I suddenly decided "BAM it needs a sunset!" and mindlessly just added one in with no real thought on the repercussions lol

Thanks for the feed back

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SeriphAngel [2012-08-08 22:39:37 +0000 UTC]

My the improvement is greatly seen. You may want to work on the area where you place the light affect on the eyes(the white oval in the corner of them). They are a tad big.

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Natty354 In reply to SeriphAngel [2012-08-08 22:46:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

Yeah, I agree I do make the shines in her eyes a bit big but I am glad that it's just that that was too big. Usually it's the breasts that are a tad big XD

Thanks for the constructive crit.

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SeriphAngel In reply to Natty354 [2012-08-08 23:56:32 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome. I am happy I could help.

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Artooinst [2012-08-08 22:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant improvement

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Natty354 In reply to Artooinst [2012-08-08 22:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Artoonist

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Artooinst In reply to Natty354 [2012-08-08 22:50:44 +0000 UTC]

It's been a long time bud... ^^

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Natalie02 [2012-08-08 21:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow, awesome! You've improved so much!!

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Natty354 In reply to Natalie02 [2012-08-08 22:45:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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Natalie02 In reply to Natty354 [2012-08-08 22:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome dear

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medrazerblade [2012-08-08 21:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Nice Improvement!!!

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Natty354 In reply to medrazerblade [2012-08-08 22:45:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Much appreciated

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medrazerblade In reply to Natty354 [2012-08-09 01:44:06 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!!

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Shadztow [2012-08-08 21:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Woooooooooooow!!! Now that's what I call improvement!

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Natty354 In reply to Shadztow [2012-08-08 22:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Really? wow, thank you very much

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Shadztow In reply to Natty354 [2012-08-08 22:55:43 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome :3

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Elmont [2012-08-08 21:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow...Now youΒ΄re better :3

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Natty354 In reply to Elmont [2012-08-08 22:44:43 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you so very much

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