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Pieonix [2020-02-04 11:25:09 +0000 UTC]
*starts waking his hand in a taunting manor with a stick* shouldnt have asked not to be beaten with a stick..
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MAGEBAD [2018-09-27 13:57:14 +0000 UTC]
Was there ever a part 2Β
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Emerald1000 [2015-05-31 08:07:05 +0000 UTC]
I liked that story.
Also what is Felarya cause It looks like good story material
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imotwomawesome [2013-10-19 23:21:51 +0000 UTC]
oh. my. Β CRAPPADEEDOODOO!!!
I have an OC his name is Ken and he has a sister Melany (Mel for short) OMG
except my Ken and Mel are older XD
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imotwomawesome In reply to imotwomawesome [2013-10-19 23:26:09 +0000 UTC]
fudge my OC Ken has a crush on a girl named Lialani, Lia for short. Β WHAT THE HELL
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right2fail [2013-08-24 18:41:58 +0000 UTC]
Keela had just been transported to ANOTHER UNIVERSE, and all she cared about was her date the next day? Doesn't seem believalble.
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lttaco13 [2013-08-11 05:40:54 +0000 UTC]
This is good are you going to make this a series?
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kramooo [2013-07-20 20:30:48 +0000 UTC]
wow just ....wow cant wait to see part two
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UsuiWTF [2013-04-14 21:39:00 +0000 UTC]
ew this is so sad and mean dude
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LEgGOdt1 [2013-01-31 02:51:31 +0000 UTC]
I wonder if Ken will get his revenge on that dryad that eat his father and the two nagas that eat his mother and two sisters.
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jazz316 [2013-01-22 23:49:26 +0000 UTC]
Awesome I can't wait to see chapter 2
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twixthepichu [2012-06-03 00:33:04 +0000 UTC]
what the hell why aare there 2 of these?
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e2s86 [2011-09-21 01:33:41 +0000 UTC]
part 2 ?
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amerd [2011-08-18 15:39:47 +0000 UTC]
hope to find out wat happens soon
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e2s86 [2011-05-14 02:04:59 +0000 UTC]
Orphaned in Felarya 2 ?
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RobotNinjaHero [2011-03-03 03:09:51 +0000 UTC]
Nice work.
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neko-pet In reply to RobotNinjaHero [2011-03-03 18:13:32 +0000 UTC]
thanks, I'm working on plans for the next one now ^^
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XT1 [2011-02-06 03:05:12 +0000 UTC]
I Just want to read more! Of this story!
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neko-pet In reply to XT1 [2011-02-06 03:26:56 +0000 UTC]
thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'll be working on the sequal to it soon.
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neko-pet In reply to RandomKidCoco [2011-02-04 00:36:22 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much. I'll keep your criticism in mind when writing the sequal to this. It's much appreciated. ^^
I can see why you would be confused about the pool. I assumed that it being a pool of water would naturally make it deep enough for him to drown in. Sorry for the confusion.
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RandomKidCoco In reply to neko-pet [2011-02-04 00:54:48 +0000 UTC]
Like I said earlier, I have my slow moments... ^ ^;;
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neko-pet In reply to RandomKidCoco [2011-02-04 01:05:22 +0000 UTC]
lol, that's part of being a human. XD We all have it.
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TheBeanYeen [2011-01-31 16:21:20 +0000 UTC]
was hoping there was better vore
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neko-pet In reply to TheBeanYeen [2011-01-31 18:23:42 +0000 UTC]
I know, it was my first time in a long time making a vore story. I'll try better next time around, I promise.
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lordmep [2011-01-30 22:14:02 +0000 UTC]
Well that was one hell of a night. I guess things can only improve from here. Great hook opening.
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neko-pet In reply to lordmep [2011-01-30 22:30:50 +0000 UTC]
thanks ^^
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lordmep In reply to neko-pet [2011-01-30 22:55:01 +0000 UTC]
Welcome.
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