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Published: 2016-01-09 16:41:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1095; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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Newest Page! I've been so busy this week! School and Track have really taken their toll on my body and mind. And I'm pretty sure I'm catching a cold. With all of those factors, I didn't get to really edit the page as much as I would have liked. And next week isn't getting any better, with extra meets and competitions that I have to participate in. Next Week's page my not come out till Sunday or Monday (I have next Monday off from school) so it may be delayed just a couple of days.I wanted to try out my new drawing style, along with new perspectives (5th panel Worm's Eye View, 2nd Panel Birds Eye View) I also shaded Bulma's hair a little differently, and tried out different text boxes. I really like the panel with the glass and her lips!
This shouldn't be a surprise. We know Bulma stands up for what she believes in!
Hope you like!
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P.S. I probably won't be on DA as much as I use to be. School is very important to me, and with the 2nd Semester of school starting, I need to pay attention to that! So, don't expect anything other than the DBSID from me at the moment.
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Comments: 9
Nice work on these changes of angles!
Well, the first panel, with just Bulma's tuft from behind... I'm not a fan. I don't find it "reason to be".
But the others panels definitely works. I particulary like the focus on Bulma's lips and the full body in low-angle shot. Worm's eye view is always a good choice for strengthen the authority of an angry Bulma. Careful, though : you left the door behind her in front view...
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Thank you!
I also don't like the front panel. But I wasn't sure what view to draw since I was just showing the silence. I also was debating if I should just skip that panel as well.
I just now saw that I left the door in the last panel in front view! Thanks for pointing that out!
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I think that you can totally make a silent panel, no need to skip it. It's useful for the atmosphere and the psychology of the characters. Why is there a silence? Is Bulma pissed that Vegeta looking down her shirt? Is she on the contrary flattered? Or did she even not noticed? Ergo, it's really best if you focus on characters's expressions.
Note that I'm not more an expert than you, so perhaps my opinion worth nothing.
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No no your fine! Your opinion is much appreciated!
I totally agree that expressions are important. I probably should
have asked these questions whilst I was creating these panels. I'm
still trying to find out the best layout, since I recently found out the
importance of panels (The bigger, the more importance..etc) However,
I think I avoided showing her face because I felt like most of my pages
have close ups. I didn't want to have the same perspective yet again.
I'm taking Digital Photography at the moment, and it really has helped to
show what signals different angles give. I think I have a better understanding
of them now
Thanks for your feedback!
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Good luck with school :3 Take your time and tell your story, you're doing a good job ^^
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Thank you! I appreciate it!
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