xXJenncatXx [2013-02-15 13:07:09 +0000 UTC]
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Your pony anatomy has definitely improved, so you can now do some really interesting poses like this one, but on the subject of anatomy I think the nose is a bit squished, but this may have happened in the linearting process, if so possibly try doing it more slowly???The shading looks good especially since it is done in (non-professional??) colouring pencils, but for improvement with these is trying to use lines that follow the contours like on the mane.The eyes look particularly good but after a good look at their prettyness I noticed the the bottom highlight was on opposite sides on each eye. Another picky point (sorry.....D: ) is that where the coat meets the back leg looks a bit funny, as the coat would partially cover the top of the leg, as there isn't really anything for it to go under like how it looks in your picture.
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Gone-Goodbye [2013-02-13 16:55:50 +0000 UTC]
N'awww... He looks very cute in pony form.And it doesn't look bad to me, I like it though.Thank you.
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nenogirlygirl In reply to Gone-Goodbye [2013-02-14 18:12:01 +0000 UTC]
THX!!!!! i tryed my best ^^ i figured since ur a traditinal artist and went to the trouble of makeing me a digital pic id do the same
Gone-Goodbye In reply to nenogirlygirl [2013-02-14 18:14:30 +0000 UTC]
No prob.It turned out pretty good.LOL yes. I am mostly a traditional artist, haha.
nenogirlygirl In reply to Gone-Goodbye [2013-02-15 08:47:28 +0000 UTC]
awww thx!!!and yeah i figured ^^