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Neon-Nazo — CONTEST:: Partners in Crime

Published: 2006-10-16 04:01:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 841; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 1
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Description EDIT: Added a profile. @-@

... *smacked by * Partners in crime sound better. Joined his contest... yeah I'm late I know, sue me. =/ I think I made her too short...

I'll give a quick profile since I don't have time to pour out all my ideas at the moment. XD And I want to get this up... so I may update it later.

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Name:
Lorena Devereux

Nicknames:
Rena (Prefers to be called that), Ren, Loren, “The Shooting-Star”

Species:
Anthromorphic Jackal

Age:
16

Height:
5' 4" (5’10” w/ ears)

Weight:
189 pounds

Blood Type:
A+

Physical Description:
A light orangish, soft furred jackal with long, dark red hair, Rena has two pointy ears and sparkly light slate blue eyes. She appears to have a gymnast’s body, being rather slim and curvy and has a short, fluffy tail. Her face has a little fur sticking out from the sides where her muzzle would be.


Attire:
Rena wears a pair of khaki shorts with a special straps on the sides to place her pair of tonfa, as well as two large pockets for her extra gadgets such as a cellphone, communicator, etc. Her top consists of a dark purple t-shirt with a striped slate blue tank on top. Along with her black fingerless gloves, she wears a pair of dark purple and slate blue sneakers that have a shooting star on them, as well as black socks.

Extra Items:

Tonfa / Gun weapons – A pair of specially designed tonfa with shooting capabilities. Tonfa are long sticks with handles at the end, often used as night sticks by police. They are able to rapidly shoot an array of energy bullets at a constant rate. These “bullets” shine with a bright yellowish light, thus giving her the title as “The Shooting Star” because of her starry display. If she will constantly be shoot, her tonfa will be strapped to her arms.

However, in the event that she runs out of power or there’s a problem with its gunning mechanism, she’ll un-strap the tonfa and use them manually. Due to their metal frame, getting hit by one of the tonfa is not a pleasant experience since they can deliver mass amounts of damage when tied in with Rena’s martial arts and physical strength.

Location:
Works at the HG of the E.C.D.C. (Emergency Capture or Disposal of Criminals) with Leon, but like him, her location can vary

Family:

Mother – Roxanne Devereux (deceased)
Roxanne died when Rena was at the tender age of 10 from a deadly case of malaria. It was often hard to tell that she was sick since she was a strong woman who cared for her family, even when she was slowly dying. She had confidence in her daughter and supported her husband’s decision to train their child at an early age.

Father – Victor Devereux
Victor is both the father and martial arts trainer of Rena, who raised her after his wife died. An excellent fighter, Victor is a cheerful guy even with the sadness of losing his wife. He usually concerns himself with Rena, wondering if she’s recovered from losing her mother and doing whatever he can to help others. He has been a longtime friend of Leon’s father, Janus, and enjoys nothing more than watching both of their kids grow up.

Gender:
Female

Birthdate:
November 3rd 1989

Marital Status:
Single

Hobbies:
Sparring, martial arts, bothering Leon by calling him Glenn, skateboarding, tinkering with technology

Abilities:
Martial arts expert, rather strong physically in arms and legs

Strengths:
Very athletic, intelligent, great skill in using tonfa, acrobatic, attentive, tough

Weaknesses:
Tonfa guns take awhile to recharge after being used continuously, not always precise when shooting (but her firing is constant), weaker against electric based attacks, over adventurous and daring

Likes:
Video games, technologically advanced weapons, joking around, music, the martial arts, having company

Dislikes:
Brussel sprouts, educational television, low-tech weapons, chemistry, being left behind, being alone, the hospital

Personality:

An optimistic jackal, Rena likes a good adventure and is very brave. Unlike her laid-back friend Leon, she likes to be on the move and puts a lot of effort in everything she does. She’s also more attentive with what’s going on around her and is more focused in her work. It would appear she can be a little bossy with Leon, often telling him off when he gets distracted or scolding him to be more serious and careful.

Due to their fathers being family friends, she and Leon have been together since they were little and they share a sibling like relationship. She loves to joke around with him and has a tendency of calling him “Glenn” just to bother him. Unlike his parents however, Rena respects his name change and actually likes it. She looks out for klutzy Leon, acting as the emotional support for him whenever he needs it.

Her more short tempered side is shown when people criticize her work in weapons. Rena is very intelligent in the fields of weapon engineering and is easily insulted if people “blame her weapons” or by harsh criticism. She also gets annoyed when others leave her behind or keep secrets from her. Sometimes she spaces out or is depressed, and these are the times she looks back at when her mother died. Rena loved her mother very much and the shock of losing her hasn’t disappeared yet.

Despite her sadness, she tried to keep a cheery outlook on life and always tries to be strong like her mother and father. She’s very supportive of others and tries to do whatever she can to help, showing signs of stubbornness when doing so. Rena hates to see others down, often joking around to cheer them up or liven up a dull moment. Don’t let her kind-hearted personality fool you; Rena’s just as deadly as she is lovely and won’t hesitate to beat up someone who harms her family or friends.
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Comments: 29

SallyTheRabbit [2006-10-21 23:14:39 +0000 UTC]

wow! she looks really pretty I like her design and outfit ^_^ very cool and the lighting and shading looks really nice too and the description is huge! o0 wowee! X3 very amazing that probly wouldve taken forever to type down X3

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interfeci [2006-10-17 11:01:13 +0000 UTC]

hey looking good

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BaneTUH [2006-10-17 00:45:28 +0000 UTC]

And I do like the personality. I think it would work well with Leon XD

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BaneTUH [2006-10-17 00:42:56 +0000 UTC]

She sure does weigh alot for a skinny, sixteen year old, 5'4" girl

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Neon-Nazo In reply to BaneTUH [2006-10-17 04:27:09 +0000 UTC]

...

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Lily-Hedgehog [2006-10-16 17:59:14 +0000 UTC]

awesome job Naz looks beautiful ^^

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Neon-Nazo In reply to Lily-Hedgehog [2006-10-16 23:03:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Cyberblade [2006-10-16 16:43:38 +0000 UTC]

Heh, finally, another entry. Guess it's no longer a one sided competition. XP *will make better comment when not on school computers*

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Cyberblade In reply to Cyberblade [2006-10-16 21:05:35 +0000 UTC]

*off school computers* Excellent design Nazo. ^^ Aside from the arm Bane mentioned, my only crit is that the legs look a little off. Perhaps they're just a little bit too thin or a little bit too far apart it's hard to tell. Awesome job. ^^

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Neon-Nazo In reply to Cyberblade [2006-10-16 23:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Well I fixed the arm bit (I didn't mind, since I forgot the copyright anyways... stupid me), but I don't really understand what ya mean by the whole leg thing. X3 Meh, I'll keep that in mind for next time.

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Cyberblade In reply to Neon-Nazo [2006-10-17 00:09:52 +0000 UTC]

I dun't quite understand it either, or I'd be more specific. XD Theres just something akward about em methinks. Ah well, perhaps it's just me.

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Cyberblade In reply to Cyberblade [2006-10-17 00:11:30 +0000 UTC]

ACK! XO Noticed something else. The thumb on the hand holding the tonfa thats behind her, is on the wrong side. XD Try holding your hand like that, tis impossible.

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Neon-Nazo In reply to Cyberblade [2006-10-17 04:28:44 +0000 UTC]

@_@

*edits for hopefully the last time*

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Cyberblade In reply to Neon-Nazo [2006-10-17 11:14:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh and theres also a problem with *bricked*

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ShockRabbit [2006-10-16 11:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job, Naz. Lorena looks great, and her weapons are cool, too. Keep it up!

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BaneTUH [2006-10-16 10:59:20 +0000 UTC]

the arm in the back needs to be moved more to the left, because it's not close enough to the joint v.v

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Neon-Nazo In reply to BaneTUH [2006-10-16 23:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Fixed it... I think.

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Autobot-Revimus [2006-10-16 06:26:49 +0000 UTC]

Someone's been watching Rave Master lately. XD

Nice work, she's a cute character, but also tough looking. And the straps on her Tonfa Gun's being wrapped around her arms looks like a good idea to me. Good luck in the contest, and keep up the good work.

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Neon-Nazo In reply to Autobot-Revimus [2006-10-16 23:04:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh, and thanks for the comment.

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Autobot-Revimus In reply to Neon-Nazo [2006-10-17 02:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh, and you're welcome.

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Neon-Nazo In reply to Autobot-Revimus [2006-10-16 22:06:31 +0000 UTC]

What...? What's Rave Master 0_o;

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Autobot-Revimus In reply to Neon-Nazo [2006-10-17 02:02:58 +0000 UTC]

You being the anime nut you are, I'm shocked you don't know.


J/K, cause I know you are. After all, anyone who hasn't seen Rave Master, wouldn't know what Tonfa Guns are. Those who have, would be familiar with Elli, and her use of the weapons. First episode = comedy city. XD

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Neon-Nazo In reply to Autobot-Revimus [2006-10-18 03:26:56 +0000 UTC]

... I wasn't joking. I really don't know, nor have never heard of Rave Master... I didn't even know it was an anime. D=

Actually, I got the idea of tonfa guns from Battle Arena Toshiden, a fighting game for the Sega Saturn. One of the characters, Tracy, was a police cop who had tonfa weapons that had shooting capabilities.

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Autobot-Revimus In reply to Neon-Nazo [2006-10-18 04:28:28 +0000 UTC]

O.O Wow, that's wierd. Guess you should probably do a google search. Too lazy to find any info for you right now...

And that was interesting to hear about the Tonfa Guns. I did not know that. Looks like we were both sorta clueless on the other's knowledge...

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neelpos [2006-10-16 05:26:54 +0000 UTC]

^.^
i likez eets

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Lilyprower [2006-10-16 04:37:57 +0000 UTC]

^^ nicey done, the coloring and kawaii pose all came out nicely

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CakePrower [2006-10-16 04:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Wheee! Awesome, tis done! Great pic, Naz!

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Neon-Nazo In reply to CakePrower [2006-10-16 23:01:57 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I took so long with my entry. X3

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Uneiden [2006-10-16 04:03:43 +0000 UTC]

Holy potato, you are the "Good at art."

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