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ElissaKarminakria [2019-04-16 12:44:39 +0000 UTC]

Nice and clean! Lovely

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AviGebal [2019-04-15 01:01:38 +0000 UTC]

I like this because I can see where you  push yourself with each drawing.

Her eyes trapped me as soon as I saw this.

Keep drawing, and each one will bring the subtle and eventual changes to your art that you desire.

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Markoos-Gang [2019-04-14 23:41:12 +0000 UTC]

Hi! Im from ProjectComment  

I believe atomic snarl mentioned alot of things I wanted too, but Im commenting anyway because I love this piece!

First of all, I really like this style you have, but I believe working on making the face more 3D would help add to the image. The face looks kinda flat which isnt great. Using references and mimicking the lighting and shading on a human face might be beneficial. www.pinterest.com.au/jpegjorda… If you look at these faces (I picked female as you seem to draw a lot of female characters) You can see heavier shading in certain areas. Especially on the neck. I hope these references can help you out a bit. Your shading is really nice other than that, and is very soft and effective. I would suggest also experimenting with different expressions, lightings and moods. All your art from what Ive seen just have the character with a blank expression with simple lighting. Looking up references of different scenes, posing and emotions can make your art a lot more interesting. If you struggle picking an emotion for the scene (which I do) www.seventhsanctum.com/generat… this is a pretty useful site. 

Good luck with the rest of your art journey!

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NewHorizontStudio [2019-04-14 20:35:45 +0000 UTC]

Not bad pretty good

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stickirice [2019-04-14 18:28:19 +0000 UTC]

No, i lIke it!
you should feel proud of yourself ^^  thank you!

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atomicsnarl [2019-04-13 19:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to DA and welcome to Project Comment!  I see you've been here for 3 weeks and your gallery looks very good. 

If you're  looking to go further with your style, may I suggest a bit more shading to bring out the 3D shapes of the head and hair.   Your work Reference is very well done, and more shadow under the chin would help here.  Also, I'm not sure if this is a straight on view or slightly turned to the right.  The even space outside of the eyes and nose position suggest it's almost straight on, but the curving hair on the left side suggests more of a 3/4 view.  In Reference, the head turn is much clearer based on the offsets of the nose, cheek line, and space outside the eyes. (There's probably a name for that area, I just don't know it).  Lastly, you have a nice dark shadow under her forehead hair - something similar either side of the neck for the shaded hair there would help add depth.

Good stuff.  Applause! 

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