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Description Spoilers for the movie WALL-E

Dark clouds loomed over the landscape that the members of Operation: Recolonize had staked as their own. Like many other traits of the planet, knowledge of rain was programmed into EVE's brain, and she knew she had once been in a rain storm while in stasis, but none of that made EVE any more used to that which she was feeling for the first time.

It took EVE about five minutes to figure out why humans mostly headed for cover when storms came. At the very least, they made one feel uncomfortable. She didn't have the same issue with getting wet that her organic comrades had, but rather there was a special issue only she had. The crevice that her head stood above acted as a bowl, and the water that dripped from her head all fell into it and started to build up. It felt so awkward that she's have to shake the water out rather frequently. The storm's complete covering over their patch of the sky only pointed to this annoying routine continuing for the entire, long trek home.

But then he came.

She simply watched the Waste Allocator curiously as she continued hovering towards their home. He pulled out an old (but without holes, and she wondered how much work it was to find that) umbrella and rolled along beside her, holding it over her head. It was small. Rain still was hammering down on him. EVE wondered if he even noticed, since his expression looked so content. And he would be content. He always was when he could be near her. It didn't matter what he had to go through for it, and seeing that trait in him yet again softened EVE's expression greatly. He would let himself be completely drenched just so she wouldn't feel a little discomfort.

But he didn't have to do that.

As she hovered sideways towards him, she brought out her fingers. She put both hands on the umbrella handle, intertwining one with the one WALL-E was holding it with. Now they were both under it, and their pace almost immediately slowed. They looked over at one another, into the other's eyes, and only looked away on rare occasion to check the road ahead of them (or, at least, EVE checked anyway.) WALL-E put his other hand on EVE's other hand, and the huddled together happily as they kept moving.

EVE turned away from the warmth for a moment and looked up at the sky. It was still the same dark colors. Still the same gloomy clouds that only promised more of the storm, and yet now it all seemed so beautiful. It wasn't the first time she'd felt that way. She turned back to WALL-E and put a spark on the side of his head. He sighed. She liked that.

They finally got home. It was too soon.
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Comments: 52

Netbug009 In reply to ??? [2017-10-30 03:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Sprinkles257 [2016-10-30 23:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Awww, so sweet.
Awesome job!

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Netbug009 In reply to Sprinkles257 [2016-11-07 03:03:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Sprinkles257 In reply to Netbug009 [2016-11-07 11:19:03 +0000 UTC]

NP!

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R36ULAR-6UY [2014-06-16 18:33:22 +0000 UTC]

This made my day.
Nice job, I really like it.

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overcastsea [2013-02-17 00:11:13 +0000 UTC]

It's 1 AM here and I'm crying. It's so beautifully written, I love Wall-e movie. Thank you for this gorgeous fanfic.

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Netbug009 In reply to overcastsea [2013-02-18 20:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much!

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masivefaddy [2011-10-31 08:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this doesn't even have to be a fanfic, you could've easily changed their identities to any other being trying to learn about human feelings and you'd still come out with pretty much the same result. No matter how I try to alternate between the movie poster images and just a plain old humanoid android, the story doesn't change. Like the other work of yours under the same category, for [link] , I give this an A for solid description and analysis.

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KatIsConfused [2011-07-24 18:29:54 +0000 UTC]

this is adorable.

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Netbug009 In reply to KatIsConfused [2011-07-26 07:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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DisneyPhan01 [2011-01-25 21:27:45 +0000 UTC]

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onnawufei [2010-07-15 12:37:30 +0000 UTC]

This made me feel all warm and fluffy inside. :3

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Netbug009 In reply to onnawufei [2010-07-15 22:12:33 +0000 UTC]

^^

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PaperMatt202 [2010-03-18 03:09:52 +0000 UTC]

I love WALL-E and EVE.

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c-war [2010-02-13 06:07:39 +0000 UTC]

That is REALLY cool.

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Netbug009 In reply to c-war [2010-02-13 08:38:41 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Cusackanne [2009-08-06 18:05:08 +0000 UTC]

How sweet, I can picture that happening so perfectly. Wall-e is such a sweetheart, ain't he? <3

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sora201 [2009-06-26 00:40:55 +0000 UTC]

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

I LOVE IT!!!!!!

you're descriptions are fantastic! ^_^

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XKawaiiXAnimetoonsX [2009-06-22 06:03:39 +0000 UTC]

An excellent piece of writting, job well-done!

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Lovelorn2213 [2009-06-16 04:43:07 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love this! It's so wondefully written and I can get a clear picture of what's happening in my mind! I especially like the way you describe EVE's viewpoint! Also, you capture WALL-E's utter... devotion to her so well! *Sigh* I love this movie.

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Gummie-Alien [2009-03-16 14:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully made.

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Netbug009 In reply to Gummie-Alien [2009-03-23 23:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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Volts48 [2009-01-14 05:39:48 +0000 UTC]

for some unknown reason, when I read this, the song Burnin' for You was playin on my i-Pod, it seemed to fit the story nicely, with the exception of the rain...

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HibikiDuskstar [2008-12-14 01:32:26 +0000 UTC]

aw, so sweet. wall-e's such a little romantic.

awesome writings you have here. have you read mine?

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VivzMind [2008-12-03 20:50:10 +0000 UTC]

AwWwwWWw SooOOo CUTE!! <3333333333

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havokwreaker [2008-11-07 22:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that story was so sweet! I'm definitley favoriting it!

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Jackie-the-druid [2008-10-15 19:35:19 +0000 UTC]

this was so sweet & cute! I love it, you captured their personalities perfectly.

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carrehz [2008-10-13 01:46:07 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome !
You see too many fanfics that are out of character/unrealistic.. this doesn't have that. It should be a short!

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JadtheDog [2008-09-16 23:16:28 +0000 UTC]

That was just adorable! It was really cute and sounded like it would be in the movie. Great job!

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Argus321 [2008-09-16 01:06:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh,such a cute fic. I love it.

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Netbug009 In reply to Argus321 [2008-09-16 04:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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Argus321 In reply to Netbug009 [2008-09-16 05:11:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Biodragon [2008-09-15 18:10:50 +0000 UTC]

So cute, and the flow of the story was nice

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Nekuyo [2008-09-15 04:59:41 +0000 UTC]

d'awww! that was just too precious.

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Netbug009 In reply to Nekuyo [2008-09-15 05:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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roseredautumn [2008-09-15 03:42:20 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAWWWWW

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Netbug009 In reply to roseredautumn [2008-09-15 04:20:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked it. ^^

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Raja-Ulat [2008-09-15 02:37:57 +0000 UTC]

Really cute and romantic fanfiction there.

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Netbug009 In reply to Raja-Ulat [2008-09-15 03:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you1 Thanks for all the comments you've ben giving me on my work today, and fo watching me too!

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Raja-Ulat In reply to Netbug009 [2008-09-15 09:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Your most welcome.

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skyprophecy1 [2008-08-15 04:52:10 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwwwww, how sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet <333333333

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KarToon12 [2008-08-07 15:44:59 +0000 UTC]

:icontheoriginalhappydias: pretty much summed it up; THIS should have either been a scene in the movie, or be an extra short on the DVD. You really have a knack for capturing the characters and their feelings.

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narutokun1 [2008-07-25 15:51:25 +0000 UTC]

My goodness. This, this is just too beautiful for words. Man...yours and 's fanfics should have been shorts. I swear. My goodness...you guys are great! Just give yourselves a big hand.

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Netbug009 In reply to narutokun1 [2008-07-25 19:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you! Yeah, I really enjoy cheekyxth's fics too. ^^

There is gonna be a short on the DVD though. Not based on anything we wrote of course, but still a short.

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narutokun1 In reply to Netbug009 [2008-07-25 20:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it's called BURN-E. It's about the robot that got locked out. It's gonna be good. But still you are an AWESOME writer!

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Netbug009 In reply to narutokun1 [2008-07-25 22:56:02 +0000 UTC]

I know, I'm really curious as to what they're gonna do with that? Is it like, gonna be the story of how he gets back in? XDDD

Thank you. ^^

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theoriginalhappydais [2008-07-25 13:24:52 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

That is ... BEAUTIFUL!!!!! *wants to cry* *...but can't *

This is a true gem in WALL-E fanfic. You described the scenery PERFECTLY, described what would happen to EVE in a NATURAL way, and the bond between the two? PRICELESS! Pixar should have made THIS a short to go with the DVD!

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Netbug009 In reply to theoriginalhappydais [2008-07-25 19:40:10 +0000 UTC]

But what they're gonna do for a short sounds so funny! XD

People really seems to like this one. Come to think of it, I'm happy with it too.

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theoriginalhappydais In reply to Netbug009 [2008-07-26 00:09:01 +0000 UTC]

If I can find some *good* screenshots, I want to do a fabric BURN-E. But, I can't find any.

This is so good, it's getting a **********.

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Netbug009 In reply to theoriginalhappydais [2008-07-27 08:02:46 +0000 UTC]

I could find you some if you like.

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