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psychoheat [2006-01-29 23:10:05 +0000 UTC]
I like what you did here, good color choices, and i see you know how to handdle the light source which can be tricky some times.
I think what you need to work on is the handdeling of your strokes, right now on your shadows and Highlights they look a bit random, also as you can see there are some elements blocking the light, and those should create drop shadows on the elements that apply, like the head should be creating a drop shadow on the neck and the legs on the art to our right.
The sky loos good, but try to use some more tones, it looks kind of monocromatic right now, so some variations in tone and saturation can give it more life.
The use of second light helps a lot to give a 3d sensation and there's more out there that is working with the pic.
and if I must be picky I would say that you could also mark more the shadows and highlights to create more contrast, and the way you highlighted the bike i think it gives the impresion that it is made of rock or she has been i a few accidents.
In general I think you did a good job on this pic, keep up the practice
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NevermoreStudios In reply to psychoheat [2006-01-31 00:40:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks alot for the long critique, I do really appreciate it. I can totally see what your saying in alot of that. and actually, that was all done on a very crappy computer with a low res old monitor, I recently saw it on my uber laptop and it didnt look nearly as good as I thought, haha.
and if I must be picky I would say that you could also mark more the shadows and highlights to create more contrast.
what exactly do you mean by this piece
thanks again. I really appreciate it.
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psychoheat In reply to NevermoreStudios [2006-01-31 16:09:50 +0000 UTC]
hmm.. make the shadows darker and the HL lighter in some parts to creade a sense of 3D volume
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ragelion [2006-01-28 09:55:59 +0000 UTC]
no way....thats hot!
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Leonnea [2006-01-26 17:57:24 +0000 UTC]
ooo nifty awsome color style
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self-replica [2006-01-25 07:30:41 +0000 UTC]
Yah I do like this one better the darks seem to give her a lot more form then the lighter one.
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