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Nexubis — [OC] Under The Star Filled Sky
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Published: 2017-07-29 08:28:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 314; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 2
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Commissions / PatreonIt was such a long time ago that I drew Koz? So I reworked him a bit! :'D
Here is a draw of him, completely in the colour blue!
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The piece as a whole:
The piece itself looks good and consistent, the lines are smooth, and the colors are soft. Pleasing to look at.
In depth:
-The colors are nice and soft, they look good together. The piece should have somewhere to focus the eyes if all the colors are from the same scheme (blue) then the eyes will focus on the moon (because it's white and the rest is blue) I can see that the main focus should be the creature and not the moon, I advise to change the creature's scheme to a more purple palette instead of blue, either way, if the main focus is the moon then it's ok like this (sorry for rambling).
-The linework is smooth and pleasing to look at, I would recommend using another color that isn't black for the line art so it gives more of a warm or cold touch.
-The shading is fine the way it is but could use some improvement, the bottom wing (I think it's a wing) shouldn't have to be shaded since the moon is up behind him and not behind him or under behind him. Over all is fairly well done.
Sorry for the long critique and rambling, hope this helps and have a nice day.
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Thank you for this helpful critique! ;w; I truly appreciate it!
You're absolutely right about the focus on the moon, it should have been on Koz. Only for the colours, it needed to be blue because of the bat his colours (and me using this as a ref and otherwise people draw him purple hahah)
Anyway, thank you so much, these kind of critiques really help! <3
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you're welcome, if not you could have made the background more purple-ish.
Either way, the piece is soft and nice to look at. <3
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Yeah true, I will take a note of it for later!
Thank you so much again! <3
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Awww, so precious! Cuddling the egg so adorably~ >w<
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Aww thank you! :> How are you doing btw? Long time no talk!
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Very good! College is eleven days away, but until then more video games and anime. x'D
How are you?
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Oh yeah same xD Just games and drawing and resting before college starts again.
Why is the vacation always over so quickly? :' (
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I know right?? I want my summer back pleeeeeease. It's never long enough. ;w;
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Fine, still a lot of pain in my shoulder but next to that just peacefully drawing :3 You?
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Awww, what's causing the pain? ;w;
I'm fine! Just got done watching Love Live because I like school idols.
I have no idea that is kinda the problem ;w; So I just sit here like hoping it will go away quickly hahah! And ohh neato, sounds lovely!
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Awww. I kinda have that problem right now too, and I just hope it leaves soon. xD
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This is so adorable! I love how skillfully you used the colour.
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omg, he's so cute!!! i want him as my fluffy pet! *///////*
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Oh my thank you so much! ;w;
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Awww, I love that he's cuddling an egg, he looks so cute! And the coloring is done really well too, especially seeing as you use blue only, the shading and every thing is really well done! All in all, bravo!
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Awwie thank you so much! ;w; I worked really hard on this, so I truly appreciate it!
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This is superbly cute man! x3
Totally love the redesign!
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Ah thank you so much man! x3
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