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Description The day began as usual in the quiet, suburban town named Dawn City.  The population was meager - around 20,000 people - but the recently completed construction of the only mall in town made the people hold high hopes for the city's growth. Among these people were two adolescents named John and Nick, who were at the latter's house playing Pokémon games.

"Go, Grovyle! Take out that Floatzel!" John yelled with assertion.  John, who had just hit his growth spurt, now teetered on the six-foot mark. His body was very lean compared to his height, but it was obvious that he still was physically fit even after playing hours and hours of videogames. His sage-green eyes and short, brown hair showed the strong points of his appearance, while his rimless glasses showed the weakness of his appearance.

"Aww, dangit..." Nick muttered to himself as John's most powerful Pokémon comes out. "Your Grovyle still cannot beat my Blaziken, though!" Nick, in comparison to John, was shorter but carried a bit more weight on him. Nick was as intelligent as John was when it came to schoolwork, and equally as hardworking when it came to training his Pokémon. He had onyx hued hair that swept forward into short spikes, and dark brown eyes.

"We'll see about that! My Grovyle is EV-trained all the way, so he’s as tough as he's going to get." John said.
  
After Nick finished off John's Grovyle and came out victorious, the two decided to drive over to the new mall in town. As John locked the door to his house, the news came on with an evacuation warning for the entire town. Unfortunately, they did not hear the warnings nor notice all of the cars leaving; the house was on a dirt road far from the evacuation route, and the mall was far from it as well...

The two best friends reached the mall, and are somewhat stunned when they notice that there were almost no cars in the parking lot.

"That's odd..." John said as they walked past the automated sliding- glass doors into the mall. "This place just opened, and it's a ghost town."

"Yeah, you're right," Nick replied as he nervously rubbed the back of his neck. "But we might as well take a look around."

So look around they did. They searched countless stores, boutiques, and departments for any sign of life, but they found none. The two decide to stop in the central plaza to try and figure out what made everyone leave.

"Maybe there's been a zombie outbreak or something?" John said with a half-chuckle.

"...If there WERE zombies, we'd already by dead by now or zombies ourselves," Nick replied. "You know we didn't come up with a good zombie plan."

"Oh, come on, Nick...I keep saying use nukes, but you keep saying not to. It seriously doesn't help if you disagree to all of my-" John stops his sentence short as he hears a growl coming from one of the clothing stores.

"What's wrong?" Nick asked.

"Listen...something's in that store." John pointed to the clothing store, and made a hand gesture for Nick to stop talking. A few seconds later, the growling started again. It sounded like the high-pitched hiss of a cat, but had the same intimidating air of a guttural grunt.  This got both John and Nick to become suspicious, and they both strode carefully and quietly into the store. They eventually reached the front counter, which was where the growling originated from. They both glance around quickly before they slowly peek around the counter...

...And notice two creatures. One was green in color, with leaves literally extensions of the thing's body. They looked as though they could cut through solid rock with ease. John would recognize the creature instantly: It was a Grovyle, and actual Grovyle! And right next to it was the powerful Blaziken, with its hair flaring wildly at the sight of humans. Nick was about to shout with joy until he realized something strange about the two Pokémon...they were both covered in blood. Human blood stained all over the countertops and on the two Pokémons’ maws; stained on the leaves and claws of the creature; even stained on the ceiling. The two Pokémon, Grovyle and Blaziken, both growled menacingly and barred their tainted teeth to show the future of John and Nick - that is, if they didn't do something quickly.

"John..." Nick whispered to his friend. "They're looking at us with  red, glowing eyes...Pokémon don't have red, glowing eyes...and they  look like they just attacked someone...what do we do?"

"Oh, boy...back away slowly..." John muttered. The Pokémon noticed the two begin to back away with a ferocious hiss accompanying the boys’ movement, and the Grovyle and Blaziken promptly lunged towards them with feral rage rushing through their veins. The Grovyle grazed John’s arm with its claws as he leapt and rolled out of the way of a direct blow. Nick isn't so lucky; however, as the Blaziken clenches down on the teen's leg and draws blood. The adolescent shouted at the top of his lungs from the sudden, sharp sting of the bite, but managed to struggle free of the fire Pokémon's grasp. John half-stumbled, half-carried his wounded friend out of the store and away from the Pokémon.  Oddly enough, the pain from both of their wounds was already fading away as they hid behind a steel bench.

"Urgh...why didn't they go after us?" John said with a groan of pain.  The sight of the wound was enough to make him cringe, even though the blood had already dissipated. For some reason, he did not realize this odd anomaly of his body. "They could have killed us right then and there...maybe they're afraid?"

"Uh...I think they were afraid of something else, John," Nick said as his eyes widened in shock at a massive shadow moving towards them. "Oh, shit! We need to get out of here, now!""

The creature Nick noticed was slowly stepping towards them, lumbering heavily as it shook the small trees that encompassed the mall's central plaza. At first glance, a normal person would mistake the Pokémon of titanic proportions for a tree all its own, which sprouted from its spiked back like a floating island. The tortoise-like creature snapped its head forward and let loose a mighty roar, shaking the interior of the mall like a hurricane does to houses. The Pokémon was a Torterra, the massive 2nd-level evolution to a Turtwig. Nick and John quickly glance around for a hasty retreat, but then realize that all of the other directions were cut off by more Pokémon of all shapes and sizes.  The scene was much like a Dawn of The Dead movie, only with cute creatures that somehow became deadly.

This, however, is when John got an idea.

"We need to get past the Torterra," John said with assertion. "It's the only way we'll get out of here alive."

"Alright," Nick replied as he stood up from his cover. "There's no way we can run past it, but we might as well try." The wounds suffered by the two friends would already have healed completely, but a strange, superficial symbol took its place. John also began to have a more greenish skin tone, and Nick a reddish one. They still did not pick up on their changes, likely from the adrenaline pulsing through them as they backed up and got ready to run. The Torterra stopped its movement and waited for the two adolescents to make a move; its pulsating, red eyes followed them like how a powerful lion would stalk its prey. With a sudden, spastic jolt to his muscles, John rushed forwards at the colossus and slid underneath its pale-grey underside. John himself was surprised at his speed and agility; he would have never been able to do that normally. Nick sprinted behind John a split second afterwards, only he turned and leapt to the side of the creature's underbelly and instead ran along its side. The Torterra growled in anger at the two escaping humans, pounding its huge feet into the concrete structure. However, they would not stay human for long...

John and Nick did the only thing that they knew they could do: Flee. They fled out of the mall, past the Pokémon scrambling to get inside, past the trees that reached the beginning of the forest, and arrived in a clearing that looked very much like a park. The normally blue sky had erupted into a dark red and grey hue, creating an ominous wave of forlorn destruction of apocalyptic proportions to make the two friends apprehensive. It was Nick, however, that had to stop running - the stout teen doubled over as a wracking pain struck him deep down in his core.

"G-guh...rrr...what the hell...?" Nick muttered. Just as he finished  his sentence, Nick's body spasmed into a near-epileptic state as the  red-tinted skin began to morph into feathers, spreading out from his  leg wound; the feathers went down his legs, and up to his torso with  tan and orange gradients. The feathers overlapped along the base of his ankles, giving off a sense that the tan feathers were a pair of pants on the changing adolescent. Nick continued to cry out as his feet cracked and creaked, forming rough skin as two of his toes merged into one on both feet. The balls of his feet rose up off the ground and formed into clawed talons. "Hrr...help..."

"Nick? Nick?!" John shouted as he tried to keep his changing friend from any more pain. This would be short-lived, however, as John feels his own body double over from an immensely sharp pain at his spine.  "Nick-agh!"

As John because incapacitated by his own agony, Nick continued to change into a Blaziken. He growled out of pain as the feathers spread all across the teen's now tan-colored skin, and as his hands were afflicted with the same polymorphism as his feet were. Next, his body gained more muscle to gain the Blaziken's fighting ability, and the changes moved up to his face. Nick strained to keep himself conscious as the sound of his skull cracking sent his mind spinning. A long, red beak forced itself forward and took the place of Nick's maw. Soon after, two extraneous appendages burst out from the newly created beak in a V-shape, and his hair lengthened into a rough, white expanse behind him as the changes completed.

John would have noticed Nick's transformation if it wasn't for the searing pain spreading across his own body. John twisted and turned violently as his insides shifted into new locations, not even having the strength to scream. The changes started at his torso and began to spread down his legs. John's spine split asunder near the base of his tailbone with a gruesome crack, and burst out of his rear end to form into two wide, leaf like tails. His thighs gained a substantial amount of muscle, but his legs only got thinner. As this was occurring, the bones in John's feet stretched forward into the Grovyle's unique, elongated footclaws. The toes on both of the footclaws merged into two, hook-shaped talons that could grasp prey and trees alike. After the lower half of John's body was complete, the transformation moved on to his upper body. John felt his underbelly all the way up to his jaw get covered by a red, thick plate that likely was meant for added protection. His arms lengthened in proportion to the rest of his changing body, and his elbows became double-jointed to accommodate for more flexibility.
“N-no…I…grah!” John cried out from pain, obfuscation, and sheer terror as the changes moved to his head. With a massive jolt, John’s lower and upper jaw split into two larger pieces. This alteration affected his teeth as well, causing the human omnivore to become a herbivore. His nose shrunk into his new muzzle, forming two tiny nostrils that were barely recognizable at a glance. John felt the need to glue his eyes shut as his pupils went from circular to hook-shaped slits, which was followed by the agonizing rip of his skull as a single, large leaf sprouted out from the top of his skull and drooped downward like a thick lock of hair.

And then, with a painless tingle down his spine, the physical change was completed. The transformation had a mental side to it, however; John began to feel bloodlust and hatred surge into his mind like a tidal wave.

“Gah…no…you may have taken my body, but you will not have my mind!” John screamed inside his head. The mental euphoria of the corrupted Pokémon was dispelled by John’s willpower, but it caused a great deal of fatigue. The new Blaziken and Grovyle, still with human minds, were sent unconscious and woke up a few minutes later.

“Wha…what happened?” Nick asked with an exhausted tone. He only began to notice his body once his mind reoriented itself to its surroundings – and THAT certainly set off a couple neurons. “I-I’m a Blaziken! This has to be a dream, has to be.”
“…It’s not a dream, Nick,” John replied bluntly. John had awoken before Nick, but had pretended to be asleep until Nick came to. “We’re Pokémon now, and luckily, the ones we like. Think of the other people that were transformed and didn’t get so lucky.”
“Oh…” Nick mumbled out of regret and confusion. “But why are you acting so uptight? You usually aren’t like that, John.”
“I’m uptight because of the thing in the sky,” John said. The Grovyle pointed up towards a spiraling group of cumulonimbus surrounding something that looked as though it came from the depths of imagination itself. The symbol in the sky pulsated with a rainbow-colored hue, its intricately curved structure reminiscent of pentagrams and spell circles. The spell circle had an ominous air surrounding it, but it also seemed to call to the two newly changed Pokémon. “We have to get to that circle in the sky. It might be the only way to stop this.”

Nick stopped speaking at this point, and simply nodded in understanding. Faced with new challenges to overcome, their new forms changing the way they see and interact with the world, and the safety of the entire planet rested on these two Pokémon’s shoulders. John and Nick bounded towards the ground below the symbol in the sky with a combination of fear, curiosity, and determination guiding their path. Their bodies are whisked upward into the sky…

And into an entirely new world.

Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: The Great Divide
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Comments: 37

DubstepMilesPlayzZ [2019-12-28 00:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Open?

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AkumuArtz [2016-06-11 07:27:27 +0000 UTC]

So let me get this straight
A virus is turning humans into pokemon through biting

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thescpcontainment [2015-09-09 21:03:52 +0000 UTC]

KETER World Class event,

Code: Black

info: in a event of a Keter event of a outbreak of the world all personnel will go underground to the████ ████
and seek shelter.

Team Delta will try to contain the outbreak and other teams will do reclaim major military bases from the ███████.
and experimental weapons are activate and in a event that fails nukes will be launched from missiles salvos and hit major citys all over the world.      
█████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████████

SCP Foundation.

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NoahtheDragon [2015-03-24 04:51:08 +0000 UTC]

This not even close too mature content take it off. I've seen worse with pokemon tf's without mature content this one isn't mature also great story!

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Theonemangroup02 [2014-06-06 20:16:45 +0000 UTC]

Nick's zombie survival plan... I give it a 11/10!

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Thebalrog6 [2011-04-30 06:18:56 +0000 UTC]

in a pokemon battle,i beat the stuffing out of my friend after i transformed into a sceptile.i used only one pokemon,my trusted grovyle(he was supposed to evolve into a sceptile but i evolved instead of it).my friend had all level 100 pokemon.he said"your going down."i yelled at him and said"i'll win this battle no matter what,even though you beat me 50 thousand times......"he said"well,good luck with that.NOT."i said"i heard that."i beat him and he said"what?WHAT?!how could you beat me?!i'm better than you at everything!i even turned you into a sceptile and your gf into a grovyle just to make you happy!"i was stunned and i said"you......you did this to me and my gf?!"he said"well,yeah!after all of my victories over you,i felt like you needed to need more joy in your life."i used bullet seed on him and grabbed his neck.i yelled"you are the most generous scientist a friend could have!and i love you for it."i was still feeling victorious after the battle and my gf came over.we double-battled against my friend and another pro pokemon trainer friend of mine.we beat them with only our grovyle and treecko.we are the best pokemon and pokemon trainers ever.

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Jsekela77 [2010-10-15 20:13:38 +0000 UTC]

dude, you've GOT to keep doing this story. It. Is. AWESOME!!

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nfjrrjf In reply to Jsekela77 [2010-10-18 22:19:04 +0000 UTC]

If I ever get the time, I certainly will. But it's hard to get a break. x.x

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Jsekela77 In reply to nfjrrjf [2010-11-30 02:43:06 +0000 UTC]

lemme know if you ever do. I want to keep reading this one.

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Gamer92 [2010-05-26 02:11:35 +0000 UTC]

This is quite interesting. At least summer is coming. (From where I live at least.)

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nfjrrjf In reply to Gamer92 [2010-05-26 20:54:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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Nitrinoxus [2010-03-07 08:24:08 +0000 UTC]

A Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Fanfic, eh?

Heh... It looks like I might have some competition.

Nice work on Chapter 1. I look forward to seeing what else you do with this.

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nfjrrjf In reply to Nitrinoxus [2010-03-08 01:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Competition? Hardly...after getting that first chapter done, I got insanely busy. I haven't even started the second chapter. Hopefully, I'll be able to force myself to write the next chapter.

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Nitrinoxus In reply to nfjrrjf [2010-03-08 02:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know how that goes. Well, good luck on it!

If you get the time, check out my PMD story. It might help you in writing your story. It doesn't have the same apocalyptic opening yours does (which was VERY effective at grabbing my attention), but it does star a Blaziken named Ginji as the main protagonist.

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nfjrrjf In reply to Nitrinoxus [2010-03-08 03:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Yep; I'm already reading it. I loved how the first chapter introduced an element of suspense.

I can tell where you got Ginji from; it was the little miniseries of novels that were made for PMD's release. I enjoy the very high-tech nature of the story, too.

Of course, our stories are pretty much dissimilar. Whereas your story starts out rather happily and the characters are already highly experienced, the character in my story were mostly just thrown into circumstances. Mine...also will probably end up being very dark, if my current thoughts get written on paper.

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Nitrinoxus In reply to nfjrrjf [2010-03-08 03:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess they don't have too much in common as of right now. However, after the next Chapter, I plan to make things quite a bit more sinister.

Just out of curiosity, how far have you read? I don't want to give anything away...

Personally, I'm a big fan of literary cliffhangers. Whenever I read a book, I judge how good it is on how much effort it takes to turn the page. If I have to force myself to keep reading, I put it down (unless it's an assignment...). Suspense always helps to keep the audience engaged, and that's exactly what I strive for with every chapter I crank out: to get someone hooked and pulled into the story.

Pardon if this sounds a bit nuts (or very nuts for that matter), but when I'm writing, it often feels as if I'm standing in the world I'm describing. Laugh if you must, but it's actually a really good way to pin down a description. It's much easier to talk about a place in any detail if you've been there to see it firsthand. Now I know that this is all fiction, but I try to think of it as a place out of my dreams that has a life of its own, yet doesn't exist.

But, hey, I'm completely bonkers.

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nfjrrjf In reply to Nitrinoxus [2010-03-09 02:54:38 +0000 UTC]

You aren't bonkers at all; in fact, that's what I do pretty much all the time when writing descriptions. I go over the event like I was actually in it. The tactic works even better in a dream - or a lucid dream - because it makes me feel like I am truly in the scene instead of observing it.

So far, I've only read the Prologue and Chapter 1. I plan to read Chapter 2-3 today, if I get the chance.

I do try to use suspense whenever possible, but I have a great deal of difficulty actually using it correctly. I'm much better at using parallelism, alliteration, and rhetoric.

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Nitrinoxus In reply to nfjrrjf [2010-03-09 03:26:36 +0000 UTC]

The thing about suspense is that you have to be careful not to overdo it. Just like anything else in literary art, it's a balancing act.

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Desenganio [2009-12-08 02:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Excellent writing

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nfjrrjf In reply to Desenganio [2009-12-08 03:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^ It's always good to hear from readers. I still haven't gotten time to write the next section, but I hope to do it eventually.

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Desenganio In reply to nfjrrjf [2009-12-08 03:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Best of luck on that.

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jdpfeifer [2009-10-17 00:35:01 +0000 UTC]

this is an awesome story, i can't wait for the next one

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nfjrrjf In reply to jdpfeifer [2009-10-17 01:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Sadly, there's a good chance it'll be some time until the next one. I've been very, very busy lately.

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jdpfeifer In reply to nfjrrjf [2009-10-17 02:36:26 +0000 UTC]

it's okay u take ur time and do a good job ^.=.^

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TheAkula [2009-09-17 02:39:40 +0000 UTC]

Not bad, a few touches here and there could really make an already good story a great one!

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nfjrrjf In reply to TheAkula [2009-09-18 02:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I might just take up that offer. ^^

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TheAkula In reply to nfjrrjf [2009-09-19 18:53:29 +0000 UTC]

cool!

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Gannon12345 [2009-08-13 04:26:28 +0000 UTC]

OMG! Those Tf's... so... detailed :nosebleed: losing conciousness

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nfjrrjf In reply to Gannon12345 [2009-08-13 14:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Hehee, glad you like it.

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monchiken [2009-05-22 14:48:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry that I've been not able to read it till now.
I'm really busy to do it

Anyway, that's nice story !! I like it

And please be patient, I'll finish make your request as soon as possible ^^

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nfjrrjf In reply to monchiken [2009-05-27 01:05:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it. ^^

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monchiken In reply to nfjrrjf [2009-06-06 01:57:08 +0000 UTC]

You are quite welcome ;D !

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Threehorn [2009-04-23 08:42:23 +0000 UTC]

nicely done I enjoyed reading this I hope you continue with that story that goes on after this one

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nfjrrjf In reply to Threehorn [2009-04-23 19:37:45 +0000 UTC]

I would, if I could just figure out a storyline that isn't directly copying the games. A dream can only take you so far, but hopefully I figure something out.

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Threehorn In reply to nfjrrjf [2009-06-03 10:58:11 +0000 UTC]

I see what you mean, I been working on my own story which I called Pokémon: Ultimate Star where two realitys become one. I will send you a preview clip of the two on notes of chapter 1 and progule

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Neo222 [2009-04-23 02:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Just call me Neo, please. XD

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nfjrrjf In reply to Neo222 [2009-04-23 02:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Fixed. Heh.

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