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Nicening β PKMN Armonia App: Clover
Published: 2013-06-10 00:07:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1179; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Description
I've never drawn anything like this before,, sorry it doesn't look that good--
Name:
Clover
Age:
13
Gender:
Female
PokΓ©mon:
Budew
Birthday:
March 10
Nature:
Gentle
Ability:
Poison Point
Hometown:
Floaroma Town
History:
She's a very quiet and gentle girl who enjoys collecting. Her parents were both respected in the world of battle and used to travel often to fight. Though many other kids would look down on Clover for not being as tough as they were. Besides being made fun of often, Clover is just like any other budew you would run into. The calm town that Clover lived in helped determine her personality. Once in awhile she goes off to find something to add to one of her collections. The things that she found served as good luck charms to her and they've kept her confident in how well her choices would turn out ever since she started. Collecting always helped her stay organized and would sometimes expose her to things she'd never seen before. Two years later after she started collecting she realized how little she's seen of the world around her compared to her parents. All she could do at that time was run and hope she could escape others unscathed. Clover began training herself to be stronger around the little town so she could someday travel and prove herself to others. Since she wasn't allowed to go anywhere while her parents were away she grew independent and preferred to train by herself.
After her decision, any day was just like any other. The only change was the several hours of work a day to help herself not be so helpless. Life grew boring at one point or another. One day, a change finally happened. Noticing that she grew stronger over the years, her parents decided that it was time for a change and that she was ready to see the world. She wasn't looked down upon anymore, and was starting to regain respect from the kids that used to tease her. Her parents decided to send an application for her to a new school in a new area in order to help her see more than the little town she's always lived in. Since she's never stepped out of Floaroma, a few worries started being planted in her head. This wasn't going to stop her from what she's been wanting to do for a long time. Though the change may make her uncomfortable at times, she's excited to see if she gets accepted or not.
Summary characteristic:
Quick to flee.
Hobbies:
Training
Exploring- her dreeeaam~
Collecting- She has numerous jars filled with with several things such as buttons, bottle caps. Mostly little things that others may have dropped
Moveset:
Toxic Spikes
Growth
Mega Drain
Stun Spore
Other:
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Thank you to *Emshrapnel and *TheVioletVulpix for the critique <3
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Comments: 30
ffff she's really cute, d'ya think I could draw her? ;w;
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I don't mind anyone drawing her!! .o.
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ahhhh she is so adorable!! gosh i really dig her outfit how cute uguu i'll have to draw her soon <333 and congrats on getting in!!!
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Hello~ First off, she looks absolutely adorable, you did such an amazing job on designing her appearance!
Her history, unfortunately, is too short and simple. Outside of her mere want to explore outside her small town, there doesn't seem to be any event that would cause her to fully pursue that dream. Neither does there seem to be any other reason for her to involve her self in combat training (her hobbies and personality don't lend themselves to combat either). Also, was she weak by virtue of just not being physically capable/ill? Elaborating on this detail can help to further explain her want to become stronger. She also seems a tad too...young to be having these sorts of feelings. For an older child (14-16), it's understandable, but a young child probably wouldn't care as much.
My suggestion to fix this is to have one/both of the parents be high-tier battlers (participate in Leagues and Gym battles) who travel all the time. Wanting to be strong like them despite being weak or having any particular physical deficiency, she would train on her own. She would also be tired of Floaroma, after hearing so much about all the great places her parents have been to, and wish to travel the world, too. Maybe you could add that she would adventure around Floaroma with other kids, but would get teased for not being able to keep up.
Her hobbies should be streamlined as well; try narrowing it down to just exploration and collecting things, along with battle too, maybe. Her moveset, though, is fine, if you consider her training.
I hope this critique is helpful, and I wish you the best of luck getting into Armonia (we all need it) !
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Ah I see .o. I'll try and make changes to her history
Is it okay if I use some of your ideas? I think they're really nice uvu;
Thank you for the help!! I can understand more of what I need to fix now
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No problem, that's why I suggested them anyway 
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Ahhh thank you o u o
I hope I could help at least a little, hehe~
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You did, amazingly even
Her parents decided to send an application for her her to a new school in a new area in order to help her see more than the little town she's always lived in.
Once again, I hope you succeeded, and thank you for the critique !
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Thank you again for helping me a lot!!
Oops uvu I do that often when editing .o.
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We make mistakes, no worries! Hurry, it's almost midnight!
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Hello! I know I'm not a member but I'm here to critique!!
First of all, her visual app looks pretty good, I'm not an expert but everything looks like it's in order I believe, so I think you are good there.
Her history seems okayish . Mainly because it is somewhat short and seems a little to general as far as events. I know that they are not supposed to be too long but something seems to be missing from it. I may be wrong though, but it's always good to try and be descriptive.
Other than that, everything else looks fine and I wish you luck in getting into the group!
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I'll try and work on the history .o.
Thank you for the help!! ouo
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you're welcome, and,if it's not to much trouble, could you critique my app as well [link]
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Ahhh she's so adorable I wanna cuddle her uvu
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budews are so cute ahh
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believe me when I say I wish I knew
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