Comments: 9
Ultimatron1 [2012-03-02 21:43:30 +0000 UTC]
Why are you being so descriptive of every scene... It is a comic afterall, but it looks more like a narrative tale...
I mean, the scene speaks for itself afterall...
Sorry if this offends you though. This is just something that's been bugging me scince the beggining of the comic...
I still look forward towards the end though...
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NickOnPlanetRipple In reply to Ultimatron1 [2012-03-02 23:55:38 +0000 UTC]
Well, I like having a good narrative. I actually want this to sound like someone's reading it to someone else, and a lot of things described in the text just wouldn't be easy to convey otherwise. I know some of my storytelling style can be a bit hokey and floaty, but I feel like it's needed...
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AnyFx [2012-03-02 17:42:31 +0000 UTC]
that...is one pink monster...
sorry, I couldn't resist...
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Darkness2399 [2012-03-02 17:23:14 +0000 UTC]
He dies, end of story.
PS. I am being morbid because you are letting potential story hints bleed through in your description. I'm not saying they are there but better to leave us words to reflect on what we saw and what might be... makes the cliff hanger more annoying -.-
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NickOnPlanetRipple In reply to Darkness2399 [2012-03-02 19:48:20 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, but I just wanted to avoid getting a pile of comments that all say "R.I.P. Aisha" or whatever. I hate it when that happens. I dunno why, it just really bugs me for whatever reason.
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Darkness2399 In reply to NickOnPlanetRipple [2012-03-02 22:48:14 +0000 UTC]
i know the feeling but easier to sift through the crap than ruin the suspense for the smaller percentage that appreciate what you've been doing.
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nitron100 [2012-03-02 15:34:09 +0000 UTC]
how things REALLY turn out?
yea... probably some obvious twist :L
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nitron100 In reply to nitron100 [2012-03-02 15:34:34 +0000 UTC]
but your stuff is unpredictable, so maybe not
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