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Nijuuni — DC - The Metropolis Kid [NSFW]

Published: 2013-01-09 22:33:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 8125; Favourites: 347; Downloads: 76
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Description A veeeeeeeery yummy commission for 8D <3

She requested Kon (Superboy) in his 90s appearance doing a strip tease, and I figured--fuck it, I need some anatomy practice, i'm going to get him as naked as I can get away with and still call him a tease.

And boy, do i love practising HURRR

THANK YOU FOR COMMISSIONING ME <333


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Comments: 37

AJB66613 [2013-01-10 01:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


The background draws the eye away from the background.

The shadowing on the body, however, is splendid.

The leather jacket could be darkened in some places. And I'm not feeling the hair. pubescent or otherwise. But other than that, the sunglasses needs just a little bit of lightening where the sun hits it.

"Lighten the lights, and Darken the darks."
-Kelly Strozier

The eyes could also be a little less intense. This is a man, after all.

A tip on teeth: while the technique you used is normal for most works such as this, I would suggest shadow. a light off-white/grey color to show the separation of the teeth, perhaps even a little bit of the gums?

Keep practicing!

Loves!

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AJB66613 In reply to AJB66613 [2014-09-11 23:41:41 +0000 UTC]

I am rereading my critique and I TOTALLY meant to say "the background draws the eye away from the FOREground." Silly me.

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Nijuuni In reply to AJB66613 [2013-01-15 00:54:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure what you mean by pubescent o_o; are you talking about his pubic hair? what can I do to improve his hair c

thank you for the critique! I'm trying to find a balance between cartoon and realism as my style, so there are a few things like his teeth and eyes that I'll continue to work on to adhere to my goal c:

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AJB66613 In reply to Nijuuni [2013-01-15 02:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Okay, well, the hair on his head is a bit on the cartoonish side. perhaps less volume?

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SIeepyBears [2013-04-02 16:11:17 +0000 UTC]

I got used to these things from you
What anatomy practice? Its fcking perfect 👍: 0 ⏩: 0

eternal-Nexiusangel1 [2013-03-20 08:00:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes~

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SquishLemon [2013-01-24 08:34:44 +0000 UTC]

lwjhbckorebfc <33 THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AMAZINGNEESS

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Wolvengra [2013-01-22 00:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Am I the only one who felt a possible nose bleed hit them? o//.//o;

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JayFChthulu In reply to Wolvengra [2014-01-16 03:26:06 +0000 UTC]

No you're not. Damn he's smooth

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MoonlightInyourBlood [2013-01-14 18:29:38 +0000 UTC]

omg I saw this and thought of Adam Lambert. Sorry if that makes you cry but I did. Good job!

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Miss-Fourtune [2013-01-12 22:47:47 +0000 UTC]

YOU need anatomy practice? My dear, I politely disagree ._.
You do anatomy wonderfully! Certainly better than I (and better than most) :3
But as always gorgeous work and again as always, I wish I could colour even half as good as you OTL
omgsowishIcouldaffordadigitalartcourse T-T

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Dreameater55taker [2013-01-11 23:52:08 +0000 UTC]

fuck yes

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XxLostInMyMangaxX [2013-01-11 21:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Look at the glasses, and the pubic hairrrrrrrr. xD
I think it looks wonderful.

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Dessies-Dreamatorium [2013-01-11 04:24:09 +0000 UTC]

the shading, especially on the midsection, is magnificent. I tip my hat to you madam

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Nijuuni In reply to Dessies-Dreamatorium [2013-01-11 23:10:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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Death-by-RAINBOWS [2013-01-10 22:09:33 +0000 UTC]

This picture gave me an instant lady-boner. Does it go any lower? *nosebleed*

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Nijuuni In reply to Death-by-RAINBOWS [2013-01-11 23:10:59 +0000 UTC]

LOL nope

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LadyVic-Chan [2013-01-10 15:01:10 +0000 UTC]

I normally don't favourite any sexy stuff because I don't really want to friends to think I'm a total perv. But THIS is just to good to not favourite. I... GOD, What about this isn't handsome??? <3

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Nijuuni In reply to LadyVic-Chan [2013-01-11 23:10:42 +0000 UTC]

LMFAOOOOO don't worry, everyone's a perv, and if they deny it, they're lying

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julz321 [2013-01-10 12:57:09 +0000 UTC]

*Gasp* Drops dead ....

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CaptainBatBrain [2013-01-10 05:21:34 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaaand there goes my panties...

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Nijuuni In reply to CaptainBatBrain [2013-01-11 23:11:34 +0000 UTC]

AWAY THEY FLEWWWW

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ZADRtater [2013-01-10 04:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh, that belt. I just- GAH! *dead*

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BigIrishKing [2013-01-10 04:55:21 +0000 UTC]

Okay. I absolutely love the shading from the sunglasses, and how well you did his buzz/undercut. It looks real nice, along with his pubic hair, which is just as marvelous. Drawing hair like that is one of my biggest challenges, and the way you have perfected it is just, uhg.

Oh. And his naval. I love how that looks, too. Like, the little line just below it, actually makes it look like a looser flab of skin, like most navals are.

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quietsecrets [2013-01-10 02:33:59 +0000 UTC]

the lighting and anatomy is pretty impressive!! good job!

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cadaverlee [2013-01-10 01:17:48 +0000 UTC]

My love for DC has just went up 1001%. Bless you.

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Nijuuni In reply to cadaverlee [2013-01-11 23:14:36 +0000 UTC]

LMFAO and that 1% at the end is the most important ;D

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darkdragonrose99 [2013-01-10 00:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Damn, do I love you practicing!

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Nijuuni In reply to darkdragonrose99 [2013-01-11 23:14:48 +0000 UTC]

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AnnabelleCross [2013-01-10 00:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Not a DC fan, but HOT DAMN!

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aoifasd [2013-01-09 23:10:59 +0000 UTC]

WOW!
Nice one!

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SquishLemon [2013-01-09 22:56:34 +0000 UTC]

34lf2xql5ehg fk3h5qmr gkjqzhrb fj1hqmx4betfz THANK YOU SO MUCH EMAGREEDDDDDD. ;A; I WILL CHERISH THIS FOREVER ;A;

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LadyDonna100 [2013-01-09 22:46:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh Hot DAMN!!

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Bored-Wizard [2013-01-09 22:43:04 +0000 UTC]

oh my, those abs

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Nijuuni In reply to Bored-Wizard [2013-01-11 23:15:02 +0000 UTC]

indeed

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redconvoy [2013-01-09 22:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

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Jullend [2013-01-09 22:37:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh my~ Love it!
You're really great with the anatomy, and he looks like such a big tease xD

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