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Description This is both my entry for 's competition (check it out here [link] ), and it's also my submission for number 27 (Foreign) of the 100 Themes Challenge I'm doing - I'll change the name when the comp is over.

Storytime! This is an except from my ONE OF US comic, so if you're interested in that, this is part of the storyline. Enjoy!

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Only when Pride Rock was at last in sight, did Mohatu falter and allow the full realisation of what he had done to finally sink in. He sat down heavily, and carefully opened his mouth, releasing a tiny cub gently onto the ground. The cub stirred a little; she had fallen asleep while being carried. This toughness surprised Mohatu at first, but then reminded him of the difficult life she had come from.

Her mother, Majaribu, was the malevolent leader of another pride. Maja had taken advantage of Mohatu’s shy, solitary nature; that was true, but he knew he was still to blame. An unwilling King, he had withdrawn from his duties, left them to his advisors, had known little of the threats beyond his lands. And now he had paid the price for his ignorance. He felt as bitter as ever, knowing he had been played, knowing that the result of his foolishness – this tiny cub – was only a means to an end for that malicious outsider. He had had to steal her.

Glancing up at his distant home, hazy in the evening sun, he thought of the uproar this would cause amongst the pride and he felt his stomach turn. Had this really been the right thing to do?

...Yes.

It had to be.

Majaribu would have raised her as little more than ammunition against the Pridelands, a political weapon with royal blood in its veins, and thus a claim to the throne once Mohatu was dead. The cub did not deserve to be used like that; nobody deserved that, consequences be damned. She was only a cub.

He felt the pressure of a tiny spine flexing and leaning against his toes. With a flicker of unexpected affection in his belly, for the first time Mohatu really looked at his new daughter. He felt his lips curl into the faintest smile at the word.

Daughter.

She physically resembled her mother – a dirty brown, with that strange sharp nose, dark shades contrasting heavily with those bright, exotic eyes which studied him now. She was quite clearly of foreign blood, bad blood from a vicious pride - everyone would recognize that. There was a softness, though, about the tiny bundle of fur - which Mohatu thought just might be his. He had seen the fear in her eyes at the mention of her mother’s name, seen the careful, watchful step she had taken backward; speaking volumes about a nature that would never force others forward. He saw the trust in her now, as she rested her weary head against his uplifted paw.

He did not know what name Majaribu had intended for the cub – if any - and he did not care. He would name her Uru; a diamond to be nurtured in the rough of her bad blood.

Mohatu took a deep breath and pulled his baby daughter close. They would rest another minute or two, before heading home to face the aftermath.

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This is my story, and my character designs. Uru and Mohatu belong to Disney or whoever originally drew them, no copyright intended is infringement. Yes.

Fun Facts About My Mohatu

~ He limps. One of his back legs was injured by a snake and has remained lame since.
~ He's quite a small lion, about the size of Scar. That's how tiny Uru is in this scene.
~ He was not first in line to be king, and due to his introverted nature he never wanted to be king. His brother Mosi died young, and Mohatu was forced onto the throne. He is generally seen as an absentee leader, with the affairs of the Pridelands largely being governed by Mohatu's advisors, of which he employed many.
~ Due to his reclusive nature, Mohatu never took a mate in his life. Uru was his only cub.

I will relate more of the story, including the snake fight, his brother's death, and how Uru met Ahadi, in more scenes like this, in 'chapters'.
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Comments: 112

Nollaig In reply to ??? [2017-03-23 15:36:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much for your kind words. I never did do any more work in this in the end, and I don't draw anymore!

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MaidenMoonshine [2016-09-20 17:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic! Very well written and very current. What a heart you have!

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AngelOfDarkness089 [2014-03-07 19:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Awww soooo cute and you drew them so very well

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Nollaig In reply to AngelOfDarkness089 [2014-03-07 20:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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AngelOfDarkness089 In reply to Nollaig [2014-03-07 22:09:05 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome

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Pokefan19 [2014-02-23 11:56:15 +0000 UTC]

I love this! This is probably my favorite Mohatu, and the story seems very interesting!

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Nollaig In reply to Pokefan19 [2014-02-23 13:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm quite proud of this piece myself, it's still one of my favourites

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MoonfireXD [2013-04-07 09:24:16 +0000 UTC]

I still love this as much as the day you uploaded it, which I actually remember for some reason. ^3^

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AkelahNaih [2012-07-12 17:58:20 +0000 UTC]

stunning work!!

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lionkingrocks [2012-06-02 22:03:12 +0000 UTC]

So why exactly did Mohatu have a cub with his enemy? It's kinda weird...

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Nollaig In reply to lionkingrocks [2012-06-03 12:38:09 +0000 UTC]

He didn't know who she was. He was a hugely reclusive king (something I'm going to cover in the story I'm writing at the moment, this is a segment of it). He basically left all the ruling and politics to his advisors, and was simply the 'face' of the royal family. The vast majority of lions left him this way and dealt with his advisors, but this one lion, Majaribu, showed him a kindness no one else had. Because he was so reclusive, he knew virtually nothing of the threat of the foreign lions, and he didn't actually mean to have a cub with her. It was just one of those things. It was HER intention, absolutely. Not his.

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lionkingrocks In reply to Nollaig [2012-06-03 13:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Ooohhhh....interesting...

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Sarangerel1512 [2012-04-29 17:41:12 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful picture and story. I love it!

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Nollaig In reply to Sarangerel1512 [2012-04-29 17:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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tenzeru-chan [2012-04-27 13:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Very well done!

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Nollaig In reply to tenzeru-chan [2012-04-27 13:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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cut-box [2012-04-25 17:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work, and a lovely style

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Nollaig In reply to cut-box [2012-04-25 17:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Cheers!

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sarastallet99 [2012-04-25 17:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Great work!

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Nollaig In reply to sarastallet99 [2012-04-25 17:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Leonardo-Lambrecht [2012-04-25 16:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Great drawing!!

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Nollaig In reply to Leonardo-Lambrecht [2012-04-25 17:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Cheers!

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mvtk42 [2012-04-22 23:18:49 +0000 UTC]

D'aaaawwww! This is so heartwarming, even without the story! With it... I'm aching for some cheeks to pinch, just to vent a liittle. XD

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Nollaig In reply to mvtk42 [2012-04-22 23:27:54 +0000 UTC]

haha aww thank you!

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DreamsCatchMe [2012-04-21 07:49:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice work.

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Nollaig In reply to DreamsCatchMe [2012-04-21 07:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Cheers!

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Suzanne-Helmigh [2012-04-19 14:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Loved this part of the movie The lighting is so nice.

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Nollaig In reply to Suzanne-Helmigh [2012-04-19 16:49:16 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks but... this wasn't in the movie XD It's my own story XD

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Suzanne-Helmigh In reply to Nollaig [2012-04-19 17:05:30 +0000 UTC]

it wasnt?...
I do believe a similar scene is in the movie where mufasa talks to simba about the stars and the circle of life..

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Nollaig In reply to Suzanne-Helmigh [2012-04-19 17:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Well.... there's that scene yes, but that scene occurs mostly at night, you can't see Pride Rock, and more than both of those things, it features Simba and Mufasa, whereas these two are two semi-canon TLK chars, Mohatu and Uru. It's not based in any way off a scene from the first film, the background is just done in the TLK style because its a TLK picture.

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TacSigh [2012-04-19 05:44:31 +0000 UTC]

This is so amazing from the background to the art style etc! It looks so much like the movie

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Nollaig In reply to TacSigh [2012-04-19 05:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That means a lot, because I put a lot of effort into the background and because they're my own character designs of semi-canon chars!

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HPhantasia [2012-04-19 05:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Love the BG in this! It's so detailed, and yet doesn't detract from the awesome drawing! <3

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Nollaig In reply to HPhantasia [2012-04-19 05:53:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Spent hourrrrrs on the background haha!

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c-f-b [2012-04-18 00:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww this is so cute! Very well done.

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Nollaig In reply to c-f-b [2012-04-18 00:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3

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nocks [2012-03-16 04:36:30 +0000 UTC]

Have I told you yet how much I love this piece?
I'm sure I did but every time I look at it I love it all over again.
BAH itissopretty!

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Nollaig In reply to nocks [2012-03-16 20:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Nyawwwwww thank you <3 I hope the judges feel the same way LOL XD My premium is gonna run out soon and I could really use the extra couple of months in the first prize XD

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HellmotherEva [2012-03-15 18:47:26 +0000 UTC]

Too.. much... awesomeness...

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Nollaig In reply to HellmotherEva [2012-03-15 21:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Awwww thank you! That's a lovely comment haha!

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HellmotherEva In reply to Nollaig [2012-03-15 21:43:24 +0000 UTC]

xD You're welcome! ^^

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sSneakyFoXx [2012-02-10 17:20:41 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful (: Well done. Love Mohatu's design.

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Nollaig In reply to sSneakyFoXx [2012-02-10 18:16:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! <3

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Kara-Kiwi [2012-02-07 22:19:30 +0000 UTC]

The background is amazing In fact the overall style of this is amazing, i love it! I like the blue eyes opposed to the orange/brown he usually has too it looks good on him. I need to re-read your comic too your a very good story teller.

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Nollaig In reply to Kara-Kiwi [2012-02-08 10:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww thank you! I honestly didn't know what colour eyes he normally had and I couldn't be bothered trying to find out, I just thought blue was a nice contrast with his colours and a change from all the men having red eyes.

I can't wait to do more 'chapters' like this, and hopefully build up a readable story over time.

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tardis101 [2012-02-07 18:43:16 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful! I espeically love the angle of Uru's head and the background - spellbinding!

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Nollaig In reply to tardis101 [2012-02-07 18:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'd been wanting to draw a lion with their head at that angle for a while, figured why not incorporate it into this scene? it's surprisingly easy, just draw normal face, raise the eyes a little and add a jawline. Really easy.

Thank you <33

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TechouNoPenki [2012-02-07 00:10:20 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful and interesting story. I love the scenery! Very sweet!

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Nollaig In reply to TechouNoPenki [2012-02-07 01:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like the story :3

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ReddRedPanda [2012-02-06 22:48:29 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! And Uru is so adorable!

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