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Published: 2002-06-17 00:57:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Description Would I be better off dead?
Who would care if I did die?
No one would want to stop me from ending it,
So why would they even try?
Life is much to hard to go on,
And nothing makes sense now.
I don't think anything will ever get better,
I would try to make it, but i don't know how.
What do you think,
Would anyone miss me?
In my coffin,
Who would kiss me?
Where is it,
All the hope to help me go on?
I was as sure it would come,
As today's breaking of dawn.
Why do I have to cry?
Why is this life so hard?
Why is the world the way it is?
Crying is bad,
I am no good.
No one loves me,
And I don't think they should.
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Comments: 5

lzrelak [2002-06-23 15:33:26 +0000 UTC]

I feel this way a lot too...sometimes you just need someone to tell you that you are a great person and they love you because you need that reassurance...Great poem.

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ooempteeoo [2002-06-19 20:12:06 +0000 UTC]

i love the end!
the rhyming at the
beginning seems a
little bit awkward,
though. good job.

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mephis [2002-06-17 15:24:50 +0000 UTC]

life sux indeed

nice poem really like your words

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audy [2002-06-17 02:07:18 +0000 UTC]

This one definately describes your feelings well!! Don't worry, I love ya. ;]

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tictact [2002-06-17 01:04:31 +0000 UTC]

The more you expect out of life, the less you seem to get.

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