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StickMenCreation [2011-03-12 23:02:47 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic lighting and focus! You really captured this on the spot and the zoom on the water drop is great.
However, it would have been nice to have the droplet almost centered. That would have made it even more the center of attention than the sink (since according to the title that seems to be what you want to show most). You can actually get some pretty neat water drop effects like these ones here: [link] , [link] , and if you feel daring, [link] .
Also think about the curve of your water droplet, just check this one out: [link] . It really curves up around the top of the droplet, so that it doesn't appear frozen. You're very good at these water drop photos, you should probably try some more when you get the chance.
Keep up the good work! For more Feedback on your artwork visit Stick Men CreationΒ© - (and check regularly to see if you've been featured!)
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noodleflavoredcat In reply to StickMenCreation [2011-03-13 00:09:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for such a nice comment! I do wish that I had changed the composition of the photograph a little to center the drop a little more.. It was honestly just a lucky shot. I don't even have a good camera, so the shot was just by chance. And I guess I can't complain with that! Thanks for the critique though!
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PENTPIMTTS [2010-12-20 22:58:07 +0000 UTC]
Awesome.
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noodleflavoredcat In reply to germangirl33 [2010-12-19 04:29:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I was experimenting with shutter speeds because I was bored and literally took 50 shots before I got something I really liked...
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noodleflavoredcat In reply to germangirl33 [2010-12-20 03:39:05 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, about that essay... It is the second worst thing I have ever written, first being a poem I wrote in fourth grade that went something along the lines of:
Sticky buns are so much fun
I like to eat them on the run
There are nuts on top
They are not just to fun to mop.
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noodleflavoredcat In reply to germangirl33 [2010-12-20 03:43:22 +0000 UTC]
It is typed and written and stuff..its just not very good. oh well, i fail at english anyway so whats another D on my report card..
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noodleflavoredcat In reply to germangirl33 [2010-12-20 03:53:31 +0000 UTC]
It really has no chance of being the best one ever...there is no saving it and i don't plan on putting a tremendous amount of effort that cannot be saved..
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noodleflavoredcat In reply to germangirl33 [2010-12-21 02:40:54 +0000 UTC]
I turned in my epic failure..and it was an epic failure. oh darn.
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