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Published: 2014-01-02 03:58:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 655; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Not much to say, Here's crookedstar, still time to sign up for my mep c:
Art (c) Me
Character(c) Erin Hunter
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Hey, Luki here! Straight to business, here goes.
I really like the background, it's simple but it gives a wonderful effect. The varying colors on the green brushstrokes gives a perfect image of grass or even the vague idea of trees, if the river is wide and they're far away. I like how the sky isn't just a solid blue, but a fading gradient. The clouds are an awesome touch, but I feel like they'd look more realistic if they weren't as solidβmaybe more whispy-looking. If your program has a smear tool, that should work fine, don't be afraid to play around! ^^
DAT WATER ;A; I love it... I really like how you used different shades in the grass, tree and especially in the river. The white foam just brings the entire thing together. <3
The lighting is really amazing, the sundog/lens flare is really dramatic, I love it! Part of me likes that Crookedstar is darker, or almost in shadow, with just that one tip of his ear and one side of his muzzle in the light, but I sort of wish I could see him a tad bit brighter.
I really like the eyes, how they're shadowed but you can see these little glazes and spots of light, it makes them look 3D and alive. However, the stark shadow below the eyelid/on the top of the eye makes him look slightly sleepy or tired, and the eyes could be a bit closer to the nose.
You twisted his jaw just perfectly. I don't know how you did it, but you did, and he looks exactly how I imagined him! There's always room for improvement, but overall this is really amazing, I love it, looks just like him and the effects and mood you captured is super well done ^^ Amazing job, definitely going in my faves! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks so much for the critique c:
And ya, I felt like his eyes were abit to far apart xD, the way I drew his jaw, threw me off lol.
Anyways, thanks so much c:
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Aww no problem!! >u< I hope it didn't seem like I was bashing you, so I'm glad you like it! ;w;
Aah yeah that's understandable, eye position is something I have trouble with to, especially when my character's at a weird angle. But yeah I really like how you did the jaw!! 
No problem, I'm here to improve so I figure why not try andΒ help others do the same? ^^
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Ya, and thanks so much for the watch
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Again no problem, and no thank YOU for the watch! ^.^
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I've read the whole warriors series mutiple times, as well as all do the super additions, multiple times are well. I am aware of that. His original name was Stormkit. But upon leaving camp and having an accident, resulting in his name being changed to Crookedkit. So I guess one could say his name was supposed to be Stormstar lol. I prefer Crookedstar to be honest, it's more unique hahaΒ
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This is just amazing Maddiebby c: I love it x3
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Awesome! Selfie! lol I like how you drew him, his jaw really does look crooked. The background is pretty :3 Great work!
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Thanks c:
And thanks for the watch
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