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Obsidian-Siren — The End of the Tale

Published: 2009-02-28 11:56:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 4276; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 29
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Words and Composition: =Obsidian-Siren


All things come to an end. Since a relationship formed with Peter Dawe's last year, I started doing visual poetry of his work. Now, well I thought it only fitting to end the same way.

Hence the title: The End

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Comments: 71

Obsidian-Siren In reply to ??? [2009-03-03 23:59:40 +0000 UTC]

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-04 14:39:31 +0000 UTC]

You are truly welcome

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DragonsChest [2009-03-03 01:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Spectacularly beautiful and heartfelt Celeste...

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to DragonsChest [2009-03-03 01:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-03-02 19:08:23 +0000 UTC]

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-03-03 00:09:25 +0000 UTC]

I hear you, I've built a boat to float on mine

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-03 00:12:44 +0000 UTC]

I know you have lovely, and I am so sorry for your pain.

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-03-03 00:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your support. It will get better, I'm sure.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-03 01:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Everything passes with time sweetheart, though the time seems to pass so slowly.

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-03-03 02:39:12 +0000 UTC]

:nods: Time is relative. Thanks for your words.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-03 02:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Always.

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-03-03 03:18:38 +0000 UTC]

smiles

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-03 03:19:18 +0000 UTC]

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Valedhelven [2009-03-02 17:56:48 +0000 UTC]

...wow... you paint amazing emotional pictures with your words, sweetheart!

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to Valedhelven [2009-03-03 00:10:51 +0000 UTC]

This was one story I wish I hadn't had to tell. Thank you, my friend.

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Ferelwing [2009-03-01 00:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully sad and poignant sweetheart. The power of that poem had me crying

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to Ferelwing [2009-03-01 03:39:54 +0000 UTC]

*pats you on the shoulder* Don't feel bad, I had to stop several times between versus and have a good cry. I could have said more but my eyes couldn't take it. *faint smile*

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Ferelwing In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-01 04:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Understood. Very powerfully written, have you considered joining the poetry club Raw Emotion?

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to Ferelwing [2009-03-01 04:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Not anywhere that he is at the moment. I couldn't stand to read the words. I don't know if he's there but I'm just saying.

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Ferelwing In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-01 04:27:58 +0000 UTC]

I don't think he's on that club, but I'll check before I recommend it. One of my friends is an admin there (and co-creator).

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ChaerosWildLord [2009-02-28 23:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Hell of of a piece, we had here!!! Absolutely beautyful writting, passionate, and completely full of sorrow... I loved it. Yo have a very nice heart to express yourself with words, go on with no desmay... You are Great!!!

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to ChaerosWildLord [2009-03-01 00:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ever so much. Often times the best reads come from someone else's pain. Wrong? yes but it's the way of it.

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ChaerosWildLord In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-01 00:52:20 +0000 UTC]

no you are not wrong, but I have learned in my life, that is easy to be happy, but pain and sadness... that requires a lot of wisdom, goodwill, and certainly valor. I adored those words of you, for them reflect somehow my actual feelings, with what I loved far, and farthest who I think I would last with!!!still waiting on msn

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to ChaerosWildLord [2009-03-01 03:46:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm in now hurry to repeat.

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ChaerosWildLord In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-01 04:17:51 +0000 UTC]

gothicace@hotmail.com
I' m glad!!!

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Opalseadragon [2009-02-28 22:52:15 +0000 UTC]

An excellently done piece, a fitting end to this chapter... now I am eagerly awaiting the next new one, I know it will be great

Blessings
Opal

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to Opalseadragon [2009-02-28 23:38:55 +0000 UTC]

I always hated "The End" as a child. Now I understand. There can be no "New" story until "The End" of the present one. Thank you for being my friend, shoulder and ear. I am truly blessed to have angels around me.

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Teague-Drydan [2009-02-28 21:43:48 +0000 UTC]

well written.

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to Teague-Drydan [2009-02-28 23:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Teague-Drydan In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-01 00:11:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to Teague-Drydan [2009-03-01 00:46:44 +0000 UTC]

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Teague-Drydan In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-01 00:56:19 +0000 UTC]

where do you find all those emote-icons?

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to Teague-Drydan [2009-03-01 01:19:01 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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Have Fun

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Teague-Drydan In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-01 20:08:50 +0000 UTC]

awesome. My thanks!

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Villenueve [2009-02-28 20:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work my friend, I hope all is fine for you and if you need talking,you know i am always around for you!

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to Villenueve [2009-02-28 23:36:37 +0000 UTC]

I might, sometime later. For now, I'm all talked out. Cried out, Raged out. Well, you get the picture.

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Villenueve In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-02 08:38:56 +0000 UTC]

Believe me I understand you very well,but you are strong,powerful and hard to beat down,so please go on!

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to Villenueve [2009-03-03 00:19:23 +0000 UTC]

Trying, the enemy of my enemy are circling the forest. Time to write I think.

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psyconoclast [2009-02-28 18:52:51 +0000 UTC]

A fitting end to this chapter in your life. Well done.

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to psyconoclast [2009-02-28 23:35:40 +0000 UTC]

You know my heart. Thanks

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MistRaven [2009-02-28 18:48:57 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful hun

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to MistRaven [2009-02-28 23:35:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. It means a lot to me when you visit.

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MistRaven In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-01 03:42:39 +0000 UTC]

yw hun

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frisca-freak [2009-02-28 18:29:45 +0000 UTC]

i loved this, so beautiful and full of emotion

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to frisca-freak [2009-02-28 23:34:43 +0000 UTC]

All that I had left to give. Time to rest and fill-er-up

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TyC113 [2009-02-28 17:57:11 +0000 UTC]

True excellence.

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to TyC113 [2009-02-28 23:33:15 +0000 UTC]

Excellence has a price. The price of my heart. Thank you.

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TyC113 In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-02-28 23:37:50 +0000 UTC]

I know it is so sad. What happened between you & Peter? Break up?

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to TyC113 [2009-03-01 00:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Nods

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TyC113 In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-03-01 01:11:06 +0000 UTC]

I am so sorry. But hopefully there will be someone else. There are plenty of fish, hopefully you find the right one.

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