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ocean-whispers — the end.

Published: 2013-06-10 20:36:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 627; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description his celestial breath breaks-
his quaking mouth trembles.
with torment of heart and
blemished memories
supporting heaven on his shoulders,

God began to die.

credits:

- authors comments from Inferno by Dante
- picture in the background is St. Francis in Ecstasy by Giovanni Bellini
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Comments: 11

foraoises [2013-10-10 22:14:57 +0000 UTC]

oh my god this is amazing. all your visual poetry is just wow

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ocean-whispers In reply to foraoises [2013-10-10 22:53:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you.  i like making these types of poems, but they take a while to create.

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foraoises In reply to ocean-whispers [2013-10-11 20:51:42 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome. yes, i can imagine that, such great result though.

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haphazardmelody [2013-07-27 06:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Phenomenal. Everything here is just perfect.

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ocean-whispers In reply to haphazardmelody [2013-07-27 07:26:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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FuzzyHoser [2013-07-24 20:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done!

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ocean-whispers In reply to FuzzyHoser [2013-07-24 21:11:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

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FuzzyHoser In reply to ocean-whispers [2013-07-25 15:33:09 +0000 UTC]

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Kalika-Shai [2013-06-12 18:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is fantastic. The composition itself is wonderful - the positioning of the words and the background image you chose.
It's very powerful. Well done.

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ocean-whispers In reply to Kalika-Shai [2013-06-12 19:03:14 +0000 UTC]

yes, i wanted to provide a sort of atmosphere to the poem as well.

thank you.

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Kalika-Shai In reply to ocean-whispers [2013-06-14 23:34:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome :]

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