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oktober-nite — Mermaid by Princess-Mer-Tigerz
Published: 2011-03-04 18:49:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1080; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 22
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This is an entry for a coloring contest:[link]The LINE ART IS NOT MINE!!!
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Oh wow! You colored her so beautiful! 
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Thanks. No offense, but are you 100% sure the shoulders are ok? I do like the general pose, but the shoulders, and a couple of other things are too much obvious to be ignored if we are talking about correct anatomy. Even if it's your OC there are some general rules according to which a body is built.. Anyways, please don't mind my critique if you're not interested.
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Well some people draw that pose like that. If you think shoulders isn't look ok, please tell me. I'm still leaning lot to improve on Disney style skilled.
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I think the best way to show you what I mean is to send you the original lineart with my lines in another color over yours. Thus you will be able to see my point. I'll try to do so this weekend
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Good idea. It will help me a lot ^__^
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Beautiful - even if the lineart looks much like disneystyle...
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thanks..I guess. It's not the disney stuff that worries me, though (I'm all for disney, in fact). There are quite a few anatomical mistakes in the lineart that no color can hide (if you don't paint over it, of course). But rules are rules, I am not allowed to alter the original image for the contest.
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yeah - you mean in the face for example- right?
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well..as far as I can see, the eyes aren't on the same level, the shoulders are a bit awkward, and the hands. I think I'll just take the original lineart and try to draw on top of it in another layer to show the way I see this pose. Maybe it will prove useful.
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sounds like a good plan
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