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OnomatoMoeia — There I was

Published: 2004-08-23 04:10:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 178; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 14
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Description We were inside hanging out.
Finding ourselves on the couch.  
I was waiting,
I needed to be lead,
I needed to be informed.
I just wanted.

I spited and  I giggles.
I watched and I talked.
You and calm;
Your sweat wiggly ease.
Your eyes laughing
And asking me.

What are you looking for?
Dont
Dont tell me what you want.

We watched the show
We played the game,
We went on a journey,
We waited for the other
But
We had different intents.

I kissed your arm.
You asked if
Your eyes had a,
Disbelieve Giggle.
I would have taken it back
I gone for your lips.

We walked outside,
I waited,
I want to,

We both know,
I was crazy.
I was waiting for an answer.
You gave to me.
I took it,
But couldnt swallow.

I now know,
But I wait
I wonder.

I sleep at home
And
Remember.

This photo is from a good friend, Seansolo. It is not the street, but this street also takes my breath away. Thank You Sean ... I miss you.
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Comments: 13

davidAwarren [2004-12-10 07:25:18 +0000 UTC]

-david

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Nagymarci [2004-08-24 00:57:26 +0000 UTC]

The pic looks like a theatrical scenery.
The Poem shold be told at the front of it

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OnomatoMoeia In reply to Nagymarci [2004-08-24 04:44:44 +0000 UTC]

i don't know how to do that, but if you know i would love to learn.

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merrowman [2004-08-23 04:26:52 +0000 UTC]

you have described this moment eloquently, it really comes across that it is important to you and that it always will be there for you.

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OnomatoMoeia In reply to merrowman [2004-08-23 04:31:03 +0000 UTC]

was the poem all "8563289&t" crap ... it is hard for me to write, well write like that and i don't think the peopm is good, but i don't want it to look like shit

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merrowman In reply to OnomatoMoeia [2004-08-23 04:32:02 +0000 UTC]

it looked like english to me

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OnomatoMoeia In reply to merrowman [2004-08-23 04:36:15 +0000 UTC]

well i'm trusting you not to make me look like a foll. what would you say if i asked you to draw me ... i only bring it up, because i wonder what i'll see ... but i am not asking

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merrowman In reply to OnomatoMoeia [2004-08-23 04:39:11 +0000 UTC]

you might see i don't know? i suppose it is upto you what you see, how ever i may draw a person who appears lost yet has a strange sense of sureness with herself and a mysterious happiness.

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OnomatoMoeia In reply to merrowman [2004-08-23 04:47:22 +0000 UTC]

oh, is goal to make me smile and cry ... i think a "lost, strange sense of sureness, mysteriosally happiness" is the most amazing complement. i think a person never knows what they are like and the only way to know is to look at the poeple they know. and i would say you are ... i need to think about this ... because it means a lot to me.

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merrowman In reply to OnomatoMoeia [2004-08-23 04:51:10 +0000 UTC]

your welcome oops you dont like emoticons sorry

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OnomatoMoeia In reply to merrowman [2004-08-23 05:00:37 +0000 UTC]

ha ha ha ... i'm going to hold that emotion against you, but don't worry i understand what your saying and i don't think anything less you for investing you time into a smily face.

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merrowman In reply to OnomatoMoeia [2004-08-23 18:51:52 +0000 UTC]

well thank you then maybe i should give you another one, maybe...

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OnomatoMoeia In reply to merrowman [2004-08-24 04:42:21 +0000 UTC]

i'll be waiting, but know this ... i'll hold it to a higher standerd.

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