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Published: 2006-06-05 10:12:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 323; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 16
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A simple study on anatomy. I'm trying to get my guys to have more of a guy figure to them. And so my first test subject is my Character Darminion from my story, Novena. I just slapped on some color really quick so it wasn't just black and white. This will probibly be moved to scraps later.Critiques are strongy encouraged. RIP ME APART! lol. Seriously though, don't be afraid, I don't bite. I like when people find my mistakes, it means I can FIX them Like.. I'll get ya'll started even... His right arm is WONKY...as in.. badly perportioned and deformed. ewwwwww. See? That wasn't so hard!
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Someone already pointed out the bit about his crotch, guys will have a bit more, umm, stuff there or whatever XD But also, his waist seems too sharply indented. It's attractive on females to have that hourglass-like shape, not so much on guys. That's just my two cents, though. And of course other than that, he looks great. ^_^
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lol. Maybe he..uhh... .... .... I' not even going to touch it ! XD
Thanks for the critique.
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Hehehe, I'm not sure I wanna know! And you're welcome ^^
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Looks good. Really nice, actually. You've got the male anatomy down pat, mostly. His waist is kind of... weird, though. The right side is pretty much like a triangle and the same goes for the left, although it's not quite as bad.
Otherwise, really nice.
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Hm, i too thought the waist was a bit high. But if its not, then whatever.
His right bicep needs more mass/definition to match with the rest of him. and hes..... well, his inseam is rather high, not leaving much room for his... gear.
Very good though.
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lol @ Pants, although I believe you're right...or at least would know better then I would seeing as how i'm not a guy.
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Thanks for the critique, Bob! I'll have to tinker around with it since I saved the photoshop file. :3
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It's funny -- things always look weird when they're right. I thought the waist was too high, but I checked the proportions and it's right on. XD You're getting really good at male anatomy! ++
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n__n I hope so. lol, everyone of my professors kept telling me my guys had a feminine look to them because I draw with curves. He's supposed to be a menacing man Rawr! >
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