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Description Comments from *ShroudofShadows
Effing finally, this took wayyyyy more effort then I thought it would take, but I'm persoanally proud of the final result. Doing this hind of drawing and coloring is so different form making a page of Wolf Song. Humans have a lot more complex shading and such that I hope to learn more about in the future pages. All in all this, for a first page looks really EPIC and I'm happy with what both of us have accomplished . I only hope that I will become a better human artist by the end of this project but for now on to Wolf Song and art trades on my list of things to do lol .


Comments from ~Kiwi-Bloodstain Hooray! It's finally done! Gosh, it seems like it's taken forever, but here it is! We are very proud of this, and I am, not just for my parts but to see how well Shadow has done with learning how to shade people and doing Xemnas so bishie :3 As I mentioned in an earlier journal, Rhaelixa underwent a character change between the ID and making this page. I wasn't completely satisfied with her character design. Now, ish perfect. Onward to pages 2 and 3! Which will be colored by me, so Shadow can get a page of Wolf Song done, along with other stuff, lol.

Collaboration Parts

: Drew/inked panel 1, the hand in panel 2, did detailing and inking and for Dajex in panel 3, drew/inked panel 6, colored (base, shading, wording, backgrounds)

: Drew the "South Park Rejects" in panel 2, drew Dajex and drew/inked Rhaelixa in panel 3, drew/inked panels 4 and 5, drew/inked panel 7.

Disclaimer: We do not own Kingdom Hearts, nor do we claim to own it or it's characters. Kingdom Hearts is owned by Disney and Square Enix. If we did, crazy shit would go down. This fancomic, at times, is not supposed to make sense. But, despite any kind of bastard child of an idea we come up with, the dignity and OC of all characters will be retained. So, there will be no hot "Marluxia on Vexen" action or Saix in a tutu. Or yaoi. Period. However, Organization Failure, it's plot, and original characters belong to Ashley Cheeks and Hannah Miller, Jade Shadowblood of Wolf Song and Raeliah of Coyote's Creed, respectively.
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Comments: 28

zhugebeifong [2013-03-26 03:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Me: (Wolf Whistles!)

Organization XIII: (Stare of hell)

Me: ... Sorry... (texts on phone)

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DeidaraEEvee [2012-11-08 01:58:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry if any of the following sounds weird.

I have a character, Nexda, who I am finalizing the design on and I just looked at this and saw that your character Rhaelixa has a jewel in a diamond shape on her forehead. My character also has a jewel similar to this but is green. I am telling you this because the likeness between the two may confuse somebody and make them think I stole her. I wanted to ask you if you are okay with this and understand that in no way have I copied Rhaelixa. If you are uncomfortable with this, I can change Nexda so they don't seem so similar.

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Organization-Failure In reply to DeidaraEEvee [2012-12-01 09:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about it ! I doubt that people will notice a connection. We didn't copyright the face jewel after all, and if it's a design you like on your character, who are we to stop you? Thanks for letting us know though ! Go ahead and let your creativity flow.

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SpyroFan242 [2011-08-27 10:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Hm, pretty awesome.

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dayianimeaangel [2010-12-16 04:11:03 +0000 UTC]

i like the other one

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Dashdardly [2010-10-05 02:12:26 +0000 UTC]

... That's really odd. xD
My Organization OC Shaxeyl is titled "The Blind Clairvoyant".
Lol@Oxymorons.

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Run-Away-Demyx [2010-08-07 11:31:57 +0000 UTC]

oh cool!!!
your drawing technique is awesome!!! ^^
Dajex and Rhaelixa look like such cool characters!!!! ^^

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Organization-Failure In reply to Run-Away-Demyx [2010-08-08 06:22:42 +0000 UTC]

This is ~ShroudofShadows commenting ^^:

Aww, thank you ! Kiwi and I have been working really hard to improve on the art style so I'm glad that you like it !
And thank you X3! I'm really happy you like both of them XD!

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Run-Away-Demyx In reply to Organization-Failure [2010-08-08 11:45:04 +0000 UTC]

the art style is just awesome!! ^^ and I'm glad you're both glad...lol (sorry if that doesn't make sense )
no problem!! the comic looks really interesting, hope to learn more about them soon!!

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CPWebsurfer6 [2010-03-30 15:12:53 +0000 UTC]

OOOH! I just realized a connection, is this ansem from KH? It looks like him, and I just drew this connection because this is the first time I killed Riku's second spawn in hollow bastion. Thats ansem for sure! . . . am I right?

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Organization-Failure In reply to CPWebsurfer6 [2010-03-30 19:32:21 +0000 UTC]

Close! It's Xemnas, Ansem's (Xeanort's) nobody. He's the leader in Organization XIII. Thats in the second kingdom hearts game.

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CPWebsurfer6 In reply to Organization-Failure [2010-03-31 01:53:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh I need to finish kingdom hearts 1 already! Ugh, I killed the devil-thing. I got to ansem 1 w/donnald and goofy. I killed it, and jumped into the volcanic pit and soloed it. Then, it spawned in space like a mutant on this thing that looked like the ship from ffx2. I killed THAT too. I went to a black place, then (after killing monsters) came back out. So, I whacked at some black tentackes but I have no idea what to do now. . . I will have to repeat all this because I got frustrated and turned it off. Soo hard. Any tips? Much aprecation

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Organization-Failure In reply to CPWebsurfer6 [2010-03-31 16:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Hm...you should be able to find out by a walkthrough, but I'll take a look for you.

Well, right after hitting the tentacles, a portal will open up to go back into the dark place (Im guessing you didnt see it, you need to look for it.), and beating the ones in there will save Goofy. Then you have to attack the head of the vessel, another portal opens, blah blah, you save Donald. Then the barrier around ansems core will shatter, then go inside and attack it's core. Then you have to fight Ansem one more time and then your done.

I did a very very abridged summary. lol. If you need in depth, search for a walkthrough on google,there are TONS of walkthroughs.

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MustachedLady [2010-01-05 21:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaaaay!
Awsome page, looking forward to see the rest X3

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Organization-Failure In reply to MustachedLady [2010-01-05 23:50:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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MustachedLady In reply to Organization-Failure [2010-01-06 12:00:38 +0000 UTC]

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werewolfpup [2010-01-05 11:51:44 +0000 UTC]

*snort*

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Organization-Failure In reply to werewolfpup [2010-01-05 13:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Good snort or bad snort? o.o

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werewolfpup In reply to Organization-Failure [2010-01-07 22:05:44 +0000 UTC]

Im gunna keep my mouth shut, because i dont want to shoot you down. But yes its a rather bad snort.

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Organization-Failure In reply to werewolfpup [2010-01-08 00:16:05 +0000 UTC]

We appreciate your input, but a snort is a bit rude...you can express your opinions in a formal manner.

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werewolfpup In reply to Organization-Failure [2010-01-08 11:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, *a sharp intake of breath through the nose to show distaste*

Honestly i down want to shoot you down on your first page, because if you listen to me and change it, then you might as well change the whole thing.

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ShroudofShadows In reply to werewolfpup [2010-01-08 16:01:14 +0000 UTC]

What Kiwi means is that we want critique with the comic. We are trying to improve our skills at drawing and need artistic input on how we can improve. Now the plot on the other hand, we don't need critique because it is not supposed to make much sense what so ever besides making people laugh (though with all of the inside jokes we're putting in it I highly doubt anyone else will).
I can say that we are not doing it to fall madly in love with the KH characters in the first 2 seconds we get into the Organization . Mary Sue = No no.

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werewolfpup In reply to ShroudofShadows [2010-01-08 17:14:10 +0000 UTC]

You dont have to fall madly in love, its not just you guys, hell, i used to be one of you myself (my girl was a white wolf that had white ears and a tail) but then i realised how dumb and pathetic it was as i looked at other peoples KH ocs and found they are just the same.
Im not trying to poop all over your guys creativity, i dont even mind if you politly tell me to shut up (politely, of course, otherwise i would mind) its just think about it.
all of the organisation are relatively normal looking, to some extent, yes Axel has hair that defys gravity, Xigbar has a crazy streak, but Axel probably uses loads of gel and Xigbar is an old man, but if you look at your guys compared, noone else has wolf ears, and noone else has a jewel sticking out of their head.

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ShroudofShadows In reply to werewolfpup [2010-01-08 18:23:15 +0000 UTC]

You make a good point . I actually never noticed how "normal" they are. The reason that Dajex had the ears is because Jade does. In all consideration, Jade is a Halfblood Dire and not a human, unlike the other members.

I had no clue how to make an Organization character since there isn't a specific way to make you own. I just took Jade's original desine and altered it slightly according to how the Somebodies vs. Nobodies looked (some of them look almost exactly the same while others look totally different).

Now the jewel was supposed to be a tatoo but Kiwi didn't tell me and so that was my bad and will change it as soon as I can.

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werewolfpup In reply to ShroudofShadows [2010-01-08 21:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Thats perfectly fine, now you've told me it makes more sense. Jade is something you have made up, and so to me, her having ears is normal.
You just have to know im not just doing this to have a go, most stereotypical KH mary-sues have wolf/cat/dragon parts and magical jems/jewelry that makes them super uber mega powerful.

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alana91194 [2010-01-05 04:00:56 +0000 UTC]

<3 i'll be waiting for the next panel for u have caught my interest.
(i'll comment a little more when i know a bit more about the plot)

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Organization-Failure In reply to alana91194 [2010-01-05 04:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Yay Awesome :3! This is ShroudofShadows btw, just for reference since me and Kiwi will be replying to comments . I hope you will enjoy the comic! We should have pages 2 and 3 up within the next 2 weeks I hope =3!

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alana91194 In reply to Organization-Failure [2010-01-05 04:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Yae! ok i'll be watching for them

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