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theresamooseloose [2009-09-28 19:22:54 +0000 UTC]
this is wonderful! I LOVE the swirley pattern, and the feet are excelent! ^^
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Fhujmasterofhedgehog [2009-09-08 16:13:04 +0000 UTC]
Well, the more frontward back foot needs to have the angle on it adjusted slightly. The perspective on it seems a tiny bit skewed ^^ It needs to go diagonally up instead of straight to give the foot more dimension.As if from the back it's really square when since it's a paw it should be a bit........... more..... perspectivey (I can redline what I mean for you if you prefer x.x; I literally suck at describing stuff)
The wings are the only anatomical part that needs word, in my opinion. If you look at a bat wing/bird wing/etc, you'll notice it has about three sections, just like a human arm. You have the fore arm, the back part of the arm...... (the thing connected to your shoulders part of the arm) and the hands. The back part of the arm is where the wings begin. this branches into the fore arm, and the hand is the majority of the wing. Think of the fingers as the parts of the wing that are like... the thin bones that run on the wing to make it not so..... flabby. (based on bat evolution that's what the say they are anyways)
I'm failing at explaining this, I'll be better over msn or something xO
Make the wings like the arm and the thumb = the sharp claw at the top of the wing.
For cartoony dragons (Shoyrus for example) They minimize it and draw it like yours, which makes it fine, but at the same time, it's 3 joints and not two that make up the wing.
In short, I'd add a bit more bend to the wings to give it like an elbow where the curve is most prominent on your current pictures *just fails flat out in explaining this so ignore this if it's impossible to understand*
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Pandamunk In reply to OrionStorm [2009-09-09 01:48:31 +0000 UTC]
Yay, friends with the same birthday! Lol, "trrrrrrrrrrrrrr".....It does seem to fit her, it'll go great with her element! No problem, Jas!
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OrionStorm In reply to vasogoma [2009-09-08 14:26:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank a lot! x3 I'm glad you like her design! ^-^
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Fhujmasterofhedgehog [2009-09-07 21:41:02 +0000 UTC]
It's really cute x3!
If you want a few critiques on the anatomy, I can, but it's really hardly noticable and it's sooo cute x3
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OrionStorm In reply to donna626 [2009-09-08 14:20:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Donna! x3 I'm glad you like her! ^^
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donna626 In reply to OrionStorm [2009-09-08 19:46:05 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome my friend!
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Jose-Ramiro [2009-09-07 16:55:11 +0000 UTC]
Very cute pic.
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xMoonDreamsx [2009-09-07 15:50:33 +0000 UTC]
waoh the drawing is amazing ^^
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