HOME | DD
oWilloWo — Judgement
Published: 2009-03-07 05:16:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 257; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
JudgementShe's just a girl,
She's so weak
She makes me hurl,
She's such a freak.
She's no good,
Her dad walked out, you see,
I don't like her, who would?
She's alien to you and me.
She's probably on drugs,
She cries when no one looks,
Wouldn't surprise me if she was with thugs,
Pretending to stuff her nose in history books.
I'll walk to the door,
I'll smile and wave, just like I always do,
Because I'm pretty sure,
You don't want to know what I think of you.
Related content
Comments: 37
i hate being judged but sadley i judge others way to easily and i kinda like hearing what people think of me cause if their dead wrong you can just alught at it ^_^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yeah, that's true. One way to look at it :]
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
yup ^_^ im a pessemist who tries to be optimistic ^_^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
A fellow optimistic pessimist?
Welcome to my world
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
No problem
All pessimists are welcome and receive
a fruit basket
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
yup is yummy ^_^ i exspecially love berries! you?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I like kiwi and grapes and pamagranates :]
However that's spelt
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
oh yeah pomagranites are good too except for when your wearing a red shirt ^_^ ( i've got no clue on how to spell it either ^_^ )
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
lol Yeah the seeds stain really bad though xD
I learned that one the hard way
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
yeah same ^_^ guess we both learned the hard way ^_^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
this is powerful.... congrates on been able to capture something so true and so hard to face up to.... that girl is inside all of us...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thank you very much,
I'm glad you see it. Yeah, there's always
that inner person in us.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Great read as usual
I do like this one & think it is something everyone can relate to as we all hate being judged.
Funny though how some who loath being judged are so quit to start those rumors & fan the fires.
Lovely writing
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thank you :]
Yeah, that is a bit strange, how that works out.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
ugh. i love how you write; love your style. and its so real, and relatable-at least for me. i loooove itttt!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thank you very much ! ^^,
I'm glad you can relate, that means I'm
writing good [:
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
you're writing verrrry good
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
no problem, just stating the obvious.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Meh. not the best feeling.
Thank you for the faves btw [:
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Wow... Amazing.
The last stanza, just... Wow.
One question, is "She's probably drugs," supposed to be "She's probably on drugs"?
I hate judgemental people too. They're always making assumptions about everyone. And they really don't know anything at all.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it.
Oh, thank you, I didn't notice that
I know what you mean.
Thank you for the fave aswell :]
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
You're very welcome, love.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1