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talisath [2013-04-15 11:53:25 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Will you go on? I 'd love to read more about Altair and Adah
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SweetNSpice112 [2013-02-27 00:57:56 +0000 UTC]
i forgot to attach the love icon
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SweetNSpice112 [2013-02-27 00:57:35 +0000 UTC]
this was great, i was sad that it ended. good use of imagery. i like the dialogue between Altair and Malik. from one writer to another keep in mind time in a piece like this: had chocolate and caramel been discovered yet? and if not what would be some wonderful alternatives to them?i hope i have not been too harsh, i just want you to keep writing amazing pieces and get better with each new piece.
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SuperEzio [2012-10-03 00:48:55 +0000 UTC]
Best i've ever read Please make another please
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AnimeANDGamelover [2012-08-19 06:39:22 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!
Make another one similar to this!!! X3
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Holidayrush [2012-07-10 04:20:08 +0000 UTC]
I fucking LOVED THIS!! GAH! I'm usually not a fan of fan fiction but THIS was wonderful.
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gavinalowell [2012-06-05 09:01:39 +0000 UTC]
Adah was the woman you had to save in Assassin's Creed: Altair's Chronicles. Too bad she died. She is mentioned in Altair's Codex. He wrote he still has dreams for her even if he was married to Maria
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Oneeness [2012-01-16 22:44:14 +0000 UTC]
im absolutely loving this!
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KittTheKat [2011-12-25 16:11:10 +0000 UTC]
I loved it. Brilliant! Very well written. Its hard to find excelent fanfics these days.
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Jannet-fenix [2011-12-19 00:21:07 +0000 UTC]
Did I comment here already? I return to good pieces of art few times pe rmonth and always forget about it.
SO on.
I don't like reading fanfiction writtings at all. At all. I don't like when people use characters to portrait their own desires, writting quickly and without care about esthetic side. It makes me nauseous, seeing another OC seducing one with character of steel.
But this is great.
It does save personality of those two, turning it into personality of someone younger, but in reallistic way. It mentions some other situation, that aren't directly connected with main plot. Describtions are rather short, but I guess this is english style of writting, and does portrait atmosphere pretty well. Doesn't cross the border of good taste, but also lets readers enjoy it in way most of fanfics are written. Can be serious and funny in way that AC is. And doesn't make me predict ending at the very first lines! Also, contains more, that is written, contains story, that we can only guess. That's good and rare feature of one-part stories. Don't make continuation, or it'll loose it's charm - but seriously, write stories like this. You're doing it very well.
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zololuveru23 [2011-11-15 04:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Amazing! ^^
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GigaPipen1407 [2011-07-25 18:48:34 +0000 UTC]
awesome. i saw doubleleaf's fan art for this before, this was really good. did you read the wiki on the Assassins to be inspired?
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angrygingermidget [2011-07-19 17:22:05 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL writing. I love your attention to detail and, moreover, the life you breathe into the characters.
God I wish you were writing the Assassin's Creed novels instead of the guy they have.
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babiebroly [2011-07-17 15:43:16 +0000 UTC]
Can you make a part 2 to this story I.relly dont read much about assassin creed but now my eyes where glued to the computer from reading this story.so can you please make a part 2 please.
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SimmaTheArtist [2011-07-16 21:00:53 +0000 UTC]
; . ; i love this its its just so beautiful TT __ TT
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ozymandias93 [2011-06-15 16:28:39 +0000 UTC]
BEAUTIFUL!
Altair's part made me cry hahaha
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Tevase [2011-03-26 11:31:16 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant, justbrilliant
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DragonflyArts [2011-03-03 21:44:12 +0000 UTC]
I laughed when I got maliks hint at the end xD that was just awsome
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DomainofPrey [2010-08-05 20:36:34 +0000 UTC]
This is so awesome. I'm glad I came across this!!! xD And you won't mind if I drew a picture for this?
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KelekonaGirl [2010-08-01 06:57:30 +0000 UTC]
I've only now heard a little of Assassins Creed, but this was very good. Poor Malik... and Altair.
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murasaki5811 [2010-07-19 13:39:59 +0000 UTC]
Awesome piece of writing
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SakuSephi [2010-05-16 11:24:30 +0000 UTC]
lovely
it's breath taking
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brittanymk300 [2010-03-05 13:16:06 +0000 UTC]
You did an awesome job!
Keep up the good work
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starrypawz [2010-02-21 20:27:04 +0000 UTC]
Very well written and an interesting read.
I admit I nearly laughed when you wrote about Altiar putting his tunic on backwards, I don't know why but it made me grin.
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Sarricakes [2009-12-02 16:08:05 +0000 UTC]
Hehe that was awsome, i wish you would make a number 2 though! It was so good! :3 !
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Celestial-moon-fire [2009-11-27 14:55:43 +0000 UTC]
Is Adha in the game, too? I've heard her name in stories a lot but I havn't seen her in the game...
But this is a pretty neat story :3 I scared my cat laughing xD
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Elywen [2009-11-27 07:47:17 +0000 UTC]
This is really nice! and sweet >.< your descriptions were wonderful!
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Maki121 [2009-11-27 07:30:22 +0000 UTC]
i always wondered who Adah was
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