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Paine394 — A DEATH NOTE Rhyme

Published: 2007-10-07 05:41:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 5523; Favourites: 91; Downloads: 47
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Description This (obviously) related to Death Note..... The thumb number thing starts with "666" O.O.....

Technically some spoilers if you aren't halfwayish through the manga, but I guess its too late to warn people

Fear teh chibis!!1one

Entry for ~witegots 's Death Note rhyme contest.

I had a ton of fun writing the actual rhyme, although ~spartacusllama helped me with the "Kira kills, the people wrote. To stop Kira was the people's vote" part . There definitely aren't enough words that rhyme with "note."

I kinda suck at drawing chibis, don't I XD

Why does Light have blond hair you ask? Cause L came back from the dead for revenge and dyed it blond. Not cause i screwed up and didnt have time to fix it. Definitely not.

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Comments: 42

HitlersBreastMilk78 [2016-01-03 00:46:02 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much

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Lawliet925 [2012-08-23 05:21:39 +0000 UTC]

L <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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Litle-Noa [2010-01-22 17:12:08 +0000 UTC]

lolz funny(but there should have been more about L'y leuve leuve leuve)

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mosukikakiya [2009-09-09 04:36:13 +0000 UTC]

LOL XDD THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD XD GREEAT WORK X3

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LxMxlover [2008-04-13 02:35:02 +0000 UTC]

WAT?!?!?!?

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PaintBrush-d [2007-10-22 22:04:57 +0000 UTC]

LOL, SMOTE! x]

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SinOfWrath09 [2007-10-22 00:25:45 +0000 UTC]

awesome-ly done! >< I love it! Good job!

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blue-pretear [2007-10-20 01:52:44 +0000 UTC]

THIS WAS TOTAL AWESOMENESS!!!! Wait, it IS total awesomeness

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Paine394 In reply to blue-pretear [2007-10-22 00:18:05 +0000 UTC]



Thanks!!

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Slinkers [2007-10-10 01:45:35 +0000 UTC]

LOL, oh there's something so special and wonderful about this!

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Paine394 In reply to Slinkers [2007-10-12 19:26:22 +0000 UTC]

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ReggieTuesday [2007-10-09 23:19:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm gonna be reciting this for ages XD

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Paine394 In reply to ReggieTuesday [2007-10-10 01:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I feel special XDD

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ReggieTuesday In reply to Paine394 [2007-10-16 01:17:28 +0000 UTC]

*tires tapping out a beat*

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mylovekakashi [2007-10-09 20:53:43 +0000 UTC]

lol awesome! XD

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Paine394 In reply to mylovekakashi [2007-10-10 01:14:49 +0000 UTC]

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Kumagorochan [2007-10-09 11:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Omg! xDD It's great! Good job!

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Paine394 In reply to Kumagorochan [2007-10-10 01:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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rhiannon-rings [2007-10-08 13:19:37 +0000 UTC]

cute, and that is a great tote
hope you win

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Paine394 In reply to rhiannon-rings [2007-10-10 01:14:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! *wants the L bag* XDD

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rhiannon-rings In reply to Paine394 [2007-10-10 01:16:33 +0000 UTC]

hehe no prob

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Hedemi [2007-10-08 02:32:18 +0000 UTC]

awesome job!

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Paine394 In reply to Hedemi [2007-10-10 01:14:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Hedemi In reply to Paine394 [2007-10-10 03:10:30 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome. keep up the good work! がんばってねぇ。(good luck)

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megan11 [2007-10-08 02:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Still laughing XD

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Paine394 In reply to megan11 [2007-10-10 01:14:02 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thanks XD

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Kikirini [2007-10-08 02:04:39 +0000 UTC]

Cute!

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Paine394 In reply to Kikirini [2007-10-10 01:13:55 +0000 UTC]

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LupinLuva [2007-10-07 21:19:17 +0000 UTC]

... I lose this contest. o_o

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Paine394 In reply to LupinLuva [2007-10-10 01:13:46 +0000 UTC]

No you dont! I loved your entry!

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LupinLuva In reply to Paine394 [2007-10-10 19:05:45 +0000 UTC]

lol thanx alot ^^

but I still lose. lol

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JordanluvsGaara [2007-10-07 18:50:03 +0000 UTC]

cuteness!!~.-

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Paine394 In reply to JordanluvsGaara [2007-10-10 01:13:28 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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JordanluvsGaara In reply to Paine394 [2007-10-10 01:25:14 +0000 UTC]

w-w

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DirgeofSorrow [2007-10-07 13:02:33 +0000 UTC]

Aaaah! I love it! Haha. What happened to the goat? XD

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Paine394 In reply to DirgeofSorrow [2007-10-07 17:29:53 +0000 UTC]

I had to take it out... It was originally gonna be the first five panels, the goat, and the last 4, but then I though why not stick to the real DN story, and bye-bye went the goat.

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DirgeofSorrow In reply to Paine394 [2007-10-08 19:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Aww.

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Vera-Sama [2007-10-07 05:52:30 +0000 UTC]

This is really funny...and kinda cute...in a strange wy. I don't think I could've thought of as many "note" rhyming words as you did. Also, yay for people being "Smote"! XD

Great job!

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Paine394 In reply to Vera-Sama [2007-10-07 05:57:20 +0000 UTC]

I kinda cheated - i used a rhyming dictionary for a few...And i had to sacrifice proper grammar XDD

Thankies

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witegots In reply to Paine394 [2007-10-07 07:39:17 +0000 UTC]

*ahem*

Grammar nazi reporting, and I spotted NO violations!

I really, really love the chibis and how you you laid out the comic (and the colours - ooh!). Upper-class rhyming, AND it made me chuckle. Kudos!

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Paine394 In reply to witegots [2007-10-07 17:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Grammar nazi, lol!

Thanks

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Vera-Sama In reply to Paine394 [2007-10-07 06:00:09 +0000 UTC]

Tha's not cheating. I keep a rhyming Ditionary on my bookcase for easy access.

And you draw cute Chibis.

And You're welcome. ^^

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