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pandoraxone — Vanessa Update
Published: 2010-07-19 22:42:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 297; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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This is an update of my character named Vanessa and im pround of this picture personally because i changed my style a little bit ot make this one perfect and i hope its obvious
If anybody finds anything wrong with this picture dont be afraid to tell me c:
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I really like the detail you've put in this one. All the buttons and netting looks really good, and once again, the shading has been done really well.
I would say the head is a little bit big, but I think that's a part of your style, so it fits nicely. I think the, er, crotch area looks a bit odd though, like the waistline of the shorts it a bit too low. Oh, the way the hands fade out looks abit off, but fair enough, hands can be a pain to draw XD
The hair and the folds in the clothing looks really good though, and I love those boots xDD
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once again thank you
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Ahahaha XDD
To be fair, I can't draw that area very well either xD
It's not like I'm going to be staring at crotches all day to try and get it right
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Again, awesome with the color schemes! How do you figure out which colors go together? I love your color combos!
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Creases on her shoulders and left (from our view) are out of place.
Also she doesn't looks as having any gender at all XDD. That's a little wrong, because even boyish girls look like girls... And boys who dress in a girly clothes don't look like girls (to the girls, anyway... guys don't seem to see the difference 
You should work on your hair drawing technique.
Good thing about this picture us that you have defined knees here.
Bad thing is that you've hidden her hands. I know, they're tough to draw, but the more you draw them the easier it becomes. So don't do it 
You make really nice designs
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thank you very much, ill work on it c:
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just to confirm about something,this is one of the characters in your manga,right?.nevertheless,I love everything about her the stance,the pose and everything else
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thats correct, and thank you
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Not a bad character style, it looks great. The face is the only weak point in the pic, you should work on it somemore.
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