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the-b3ing [2011-10-14 18:32:42 +0000 UTC]
Fisheye's are hard. I've never attempted (need to though!) but I think you did pretty good!
I like the cartooney style too~
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PAniC-Rayne In reply to the-b3ing [2011-10-19 10:15:22 +0000 UTC]
I really wish I coulda done it better, I was aiming for something really cartooney (full fish-eye) but then I thought the sketch came out bad compared to what I had in mind, but decided to ink it anyway, and this is what came out
Well yeah, I've been seeing some small changes in your drawings lately, and I'm somewhat liking it! Creating your own cool world out of your love for Pokemon, I hope you keep it up, maybe someday you could become so good you'll transcend Pokemon and create an original hit
Well, about putting it up here, I'd like to do that and hear all your thoughts about it, but I'm aiming for something higher... I'm hoping I could get it published, that's why I've been revising it, same story but better art, 'cause I've always wanted to get published and for that I really wanna give it my all. For you, I COULD post here a WIP of the best page I've done so far BTW I think I emailed the old version to your hotmail a few months ago, have you seen it?
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the-b3ing In reply to PAniC-Rayne [2011-10-19 17:13:55 +0000 UTC]
Welp, there's always next time! (at least, that's what I tell myself, but sometimes we don't have motivation to re-do something)
That means a lot, especially from you since you were one of my first watchers!
I do definitely have that as my goal!
Ohhhh?
Well then I wish you luck!
I'd like that if ya could od that, too, even if it's just one page!
I believe you did! And I had read it through twice, but school wound up piling on so I guess it slipped my mind to get back to you about it!
I felt the story was well-done, even leaving a symbolic message at the end! (Not to mention I liked the personalities of the characters and their drive to make the world a better place) I actually had an attachment to it too, err, I mean to say it gave me the "I really want to know what happens next" sort of suspense as I went from page-to-page! It's really safe for me to say it left a lasting impression! So I think it's awesome you're aiming to take it further!
As for the art itself, I rather enjoyed it. I don't think I saw anything inconsistent or bad either.
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