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Paperbumptyking13 In reply to Star-Yoshi [2014-01-25 17:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad to be Posting Art again too. Its been too long.

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Paperbumptyking13 In reply to ProtoTypedKnife [2014-01-25 17:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!, i'm also hoping this could get my stories a little more attention, cause I'd really like to get my ideas out there more so People can see them.

Also I've finally gotten the time to finish reading your Prologue( I've wanted to read it for a while, but I've been busy and your chapters are LONG) and I really like the way its going thus far, and I'm probably going to start reading chapter 1 Now.

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ProtoTypedKnife In reply to Paperbumptyking13 [2014-01-25 17:22:32 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! Btw, I must ask, will you be doing a stage per Chapter like others do? Because I feel those PM fangames are usually the ones I want to read more since there's a big picture to refer to and it makes me wonder what the story for it could be! Although I suppose that to could take awhile

HOLY CRAP! You're reading my stuff? WOW! Thanks! Eh, yeah, sorry about the length of them  I originally did it because I thought it would give each Party Member more personality and that's what Renleixue  did with hers. It's a little too late for me to shorten the chapters now but on my next PM game, I'll be sure to keep it at a good length Thanks!

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Paperbumptyking13 In reply to ProtoTypedKnife [2014-01-26 22:33:22 +0000 UTC]

I probably will do a Stage per chapter, so that more people will look at the Idea and so that I can show people what I imagine the areas to look like.

And yes I am reading your stuff and right now that I've got some free time I've been able to read chapters 1 & 2 of PMtMM, and I do see your point in doing full stories for wanting to give the party Members more personality, and keep in mind that I had done full stories at one point for My Ideas.

 I'm just saying that it can take a little while to read sometimes, and if you're trying to give your partners more personality, why not just do the chapters at decent length and throw in quotes from the characters here and there like Noctalaty does for his Idea. Just throwing that out there.

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ProtoTypedKnife In reply to Paperbumptyking13 [2014-01-27 07:48:48 +0000 UTC]

Cool! I look forward to that!

Well, as I say, if I was to shorten it now, it would be all that writing down the drain I do actually have a shortened version atfantendo.wikia.com/wiki/Paper_… , but it is kind of brief, just for the sake of telling the story, but really doesn't give any character development or much of anything along those lines :/ So, if it's what you'd prefer then feel free to read those instead

And yes, with my next PM game, it will be more like Noctalaty's work, but in that game I found a different way to give Party Members characters development later in the game and that's to have them return in later chapters to finish unsettled things or things concerned said Party Member. Thanks for your feedback

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Paperbumptyking13 In reply to ProtoTypedKnife [2014-01-27 15:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Alright then

That's nice to know that there's a shortened version on Fantendo, and I don't mean shorten the stories for PMtMM, cause you're too far now, and it would really would make a lot of your work go to waste, I just mean do shorter stories on your next Idea PMtMK.

I like the sound of that, having the partners come out later in the story to deal with as you said "Unfinished business" sounds pretty cool. No problem, I'm glad to give feedback.

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ProtoTypedKnife In reply to Paperbumptyking13 [2014-01-27 15:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see, well I pretty much already have the main story written up for my second game and it's still pretty detailed while not being too long

And thanks! I honestly cant wait o get onto my next game

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