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Published: 2016-01-22 00:24:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 737; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Description I love you in your inexistence
  rabbit’s ear
  baby’s breath
              you are dust
              but you are
                      mine.

Misadventures and
     dew drop mornings
               small curls
               large eyes
     my bones cannot knit your future.

Sunsets and moonbeams
              sleep burdens our eyes
              your soft lips sigh
                        there is a better world for you
                                   than this.


-D.E.M
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Comments: 4

comatose-comet [2016-01-23 22:59:21 +0000 UTC]

this is stunning, i love how you write not only with words but with spaces too - and the last phrase is utter perfection

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ParalyticProcess In reply to comatose-comet [2016-01-25 14:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! If anything, I try to get the beginning and end to pack a punch.

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maxnort [2016-01-22 15:58:06 +0000 UTC]

whisper in a baby's breath
desire to be allowed to be
hear it change the world

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the lines are all wrong, but something like that?

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ParalyticProcess In reply to maxnort [2016-01-25 14:52:14 +0000 UTC]

Something like that

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