comatose-comet [2016-01-23 22:59:21 +0000 UTC]
this is stunning, i love how you write not only with words but with spaces too - and the last phrase is utter perfection
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ParalyticProcess In reply to comatose-comet [2016-01-25 14:50:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! If anything, I try to get the beginning and end to pack a punch.
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maxnort [2016-01-22 15:58:06 +0000 UTC]
whisper in a baby's breathdesire to be allowed to behear it change the world***the lines are all wrong, but something like that?
ParalyticProcess In reply to maxnort [2016-01-25 14:52:14 +0000 UTC]
Something like that