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Published: 2010-12-01 21:59:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1533; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 34
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Description A Grey day, the stone walls of the railway cutting are shrouded in the thick fog. Little Jane skips down the old stone walkway from the back door of the delapidated house where she grew up, on her way to fetch bread from the market of the town, far away. Through the rusted, ornate spirals of the destroyed wrought-iron gate. Jane will need to walk all the way down the old cutting where, at one time, a grand and wonderful railway once ran. Jane loves exploring the iron hulks that lay along the line. People tell her these huge things once propelled themselves up and down these tracks, wreathed in smoke and fire, but she knows very well this is not true. Nothing so huge, and so clearly inanimate, could have ever done the wonders people claimed they did. Still, she enjoys climbing through the spaces between the intracate and enourmous parts, looking at the little birds who's nests adorn the smashed out lanterns and corroded fittings.

As she crawls up the embankment and skips down the line, someone in the wreck of another nearby shack just over the vine-covered stone bridge begins playing a harp, the notes waft over the old fire-eaters of long ago.
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Comments: 27

Rockyrailroad578 [2014-11-04 01:25:07 +0000 UTC]

I like how you put an overall tone to this drawing. It really brings the idea to life and gives it an overall eerie and desolate tone. (Although the smokebox dimensions on the 4-4-0 are lovely!)

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TheBardOfOggyrLlynfi [2014-03-27 22:13:14 +0000 UTC]

So eerie and sad. great work!

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jazzaman22 [2012-06-23 13:01:38 +0000 UTC]

amazing you need to make a sequal were she sees an engine move

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Tesla51 [2010-12-13 02:09:41 +0000 UTC]

Sad. This is so sad. But it's nice art.

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PaxAeternum In reply to Tesla51 [2010-12-13 04:03:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you, and it is supposed to be

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Aconitum-Napellus [2010-12-04 16:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow!

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PaxAeternum In reply to Aconitum-Napellus [2010-12-04 18:14:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Din626 [2010-12-04 11:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Utterly brilliant.
Utterly Favourited.

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PaxAeternum In reply to Din626 [2010-12-04 18:13:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you sir

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PUFFINSTUDIOS [2010-12-03 19:52:10 +0000 UTC]

I like your picture!
It says hope, that by chance it would be saved!
Also I just notice in the back that other locomotive?
Question: is that locomotive in the background got converted into a stationary engine?
I read someting about them?
Overall great picture!

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PaxAeternum In reply to PUFFINSTUDIOS [2010-12-03 21:04:48 +0000 UTC]

the locomotive in back is just sitting there. that black you see is the halfmoon-shaped smokebox door missing. They are both abandoned, it is a double-track area

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PUFFINSTUDIOS In reply to PaxAeternum [2010-12-03 21:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh!
Thank you for pointing that out! Steam does need saving but it's the public that need to say we want it back!
Oh well thank you again for pointing out!

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DraftHorseTrainer [2010-12-02 15:28:24 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME DETAIL.

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PaxAeternum In reply to DraftHorseTrainer [2010-12-03 01:39:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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DraftHorseTrainer In reply to PaxAeternum [2010-12-03 15:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome.

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Aetherartist [2010-12-02 01:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Good, but sad. Those rusted old locomotives. No ones cared for them.

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PaxAeternum In reply to Aetherartist [2010-12-02 01:42:41 +0000 UTC]

I agree. I did this in part to show the horror of neglect

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SimonLMoore [2010-12-02 01:33:28 +0000 UTC]

Is there any further back story to this? What you have written so far is gripping.

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PaxAeternum In reply to SimonLMoore [2010-12-02 01:39:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the interest! Well the only other background to it, I would have to say, is that I pictured it when listening to this piece of music: [link]

I suddenly got the image of a little girl in tattered clothes without a care in the world, walking somewhere via a huge yard of abandoned steam locomotives of every nation, clamboring over them and exploring them, eating her lunch mid-journey in the smokebox of some huge atlantic class missing it's smokebox door. A very depressing scene, but tranquil.

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SimonLMoore In reply to PaxAeternum [2010-12-02 02:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Rather excellent that music and I quite agree!

Though I'm clamouring now to see what happened to make such a basic mechanism as a steam engine no longer work...what happened to the railway, the technology, society? ARRRGGHHH!

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PaxAeternum In reply to SimonLMoore [2010-12-02 02:44:28 +0000 UTC]

GOOD QUESTIONS, ALL OF THEM

and I wouldnt call a steam engine "basic" myself

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SimonLMoore In reply to PaxAeternum [2010-12-02 02:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Well, fire, water, it's all mechanical...

I would definitely call it basic, elemental, doesn't mean it's not refined, perhaps basal would be a better word, elemental as I say, no poncing around with invisible forces like ekeltrictiy and unseen explosions!

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PaxAeternum In reply to SimonLMoore [2010-12-03 01:41:23 +0000 UTC]

CORRECT sir, but steam is infinitley complex, especially refined steam like Porta's kordinas and lempor exhausts and what have you. But yes, restoring a steam engine is much simpler

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SimonLMoore In reply to PaxAeternum [2010-12-03 18:18:54 +0000 UTC]

Possibly...but it is still chunky mechanical technology, admittedly with fine tolerances.

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PaxAeternum In reply to SimonLMoore [2010-12-03 21:05:56 +0000 UTC]

correct sir. Its easy and it's hard. Im restoring a 1" scale 0-6-0, taken a year so far and it's a BEAR, but she is very slowly coming along! she would have passed her steam testing a week ago if her (already cracked) sightglass had not exploded, luckily she had shutoff valves and no damages incurred, and me and her owner just got a new glass shipped in today.

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Sampug394 [2010-12-02 01:04:23 +0000 UTC]

Vivid.

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PaxAeternum In reply to Sampug394 [2010-12-02 01:39:32 +0000 UTC]

glad you like it

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