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lordrevan888 [2010-12-29 16:03:55 +0000 UTC]
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This is an amazing piece, I saw hardly any mistakes! Everthing is so natural, the background is amazing. I love the shading on the clothing and everthing else, It makes it feel more natural and real. The clothing was my favorite part about this work, the desing and shading was amazing, loved it!
The design, stance, and facial expresions where not that origanal, I see them in a lot of animes, but there where very well done. For the middle girl her hand seems a bit off in a way and the lollypop handle seems very short.
But all in all an amazing piece, good job! I loved everything abouth this work!
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PerseBalthasaar In reply to lordrevan888 [2010-12-29 17:42:52 +0000 UTC]
The clothing was actually inaccurate as pointed by my Japanese Sensei Kimonos should have longer extra sleeve and no breast bulge visible. But since Ecchi is my style, can't help but give those region bulge
The loli one was done first as she has the least amount of shading needed, kinda prototype since this is my 2nd time drawing kimono/hakama
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lordrevan888 In reply to PerseBalthasaar [2010-12-29 18:31:03 +0000 UTC]
Yha. XD I noticed that, but it was still very good. I loved it!
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LUCK-Lnck [2011-08-17 06:35:25 +0000 UTC]
Aw so kawaii! Love the lashes!
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LUCK-Lnck In reply to PerseBalthasaar [2011-08-17 07:17:35 +0000 UTC]
haha keep up the good work! It really does look great ^^
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nankotsufangirl [2011-08-17 06:31:13 +0000 UTC]
uuu iso kawaii!! great work xD
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supridiot In reply to PerseBalthasaar [2011-01-06 06:01:12 +0000 UTC]
hebat juga da bisa baca pikiran (kotor) orang... ngefilter non mesum-art
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BIGDON1992-DB [2011-01-03 03:25:13 +0000 UTC]
Impresive and very cute <3
Good job ^^
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Tasuu-chan [2010-12-29 18:07:11 +0000 UTC]
that is totally awesome! the colors are quite good! and it is really adorable!
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PerseBalthasaar In reply to MetaKnight015 [2010-12-29 17:45:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! This actually a rushed job as I have only 3 days to finish it before the Final Japanese Exam. Kinda pulling the impossible, working for 9 hours per day to realize this
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PerseBalthasaar In reply to MetaKnight015 [2010-12-30 01:52:27 +0000 UTC]
Glad that people like it And yup 9 hours a day, leaves almost no time for studying. I ended up watching anime and tokusatsu for improving listening, and it works!
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Phantom-Shadow16 [2010-12-29 14:57:34 +0000 UTC]
These are based on people in your class?
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