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PerseBalthasaar — Burgundy Blossom
Published: 2010-02-20 12:16:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 5745; Favourites: 165; Downloads: 195
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Finally after almost 2 YEARS since her "official" fiction outfit (you can find the old concept here: [link] ), I managed to design a completely new outfit for her that is not Soulcalibur CaS-based.The idea come from combining the Huntress of Ishtar outfit and Burgundy Panther. Picking a theme of flower as she is a faerie, the Burgundy Blossom was born.
Burgundy Blossom aims for exposing as many skin as possible, thus making her looks raepable From some PoV, the outfit can be impractical, but hey it's smexy
Enjoy the FIRST official Sleipial original design!
Sleipial Grandi Aeterna © ~PerseBalthasaar
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I take it you don't read my comment nor the bio.
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you requested critique on the artwork, not the comment or the bio
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Oh I'm sorry we have a different PoV. For me, a critique covers all description on the artwork, not just the overall picture itself. It feels like you don't even full-view the art.
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oh i love that outfit *_* she looks like a fun character~!
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I would love to see a gal wearing this outfit o.o
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That would be fantastic!
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Thankies :3 worked really chard to concept it :3 :3
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Hi i'm sam from the critique crew of OC-Maniac
So i think you already know this is a cool drawing. the Wings is my favorite part of the drawing, and the design of her dress and proportion of her body is really nice. but the better you draw the harder the critique XD. sorry for that
Ok so comparing the face of this one to the older versions she look sadder and lifeless, the white glow should be more sharp and less blurry to give a better effect.
The string of the dress on her sides, you know that a problem with the women body is the curves (only when drawing them) and the string does follow one of those curves while going down, but the curve from going from the front to the back isn't shown on the strings.
One her body when she curves it is a nice detail but there's something wrong, in the left side (her front) starts in the same high as in the back, it should be higher in the front about half the length you have now from her chest. why? because the curve starts where the ribs end, and in the front the ribs are higher than in the back.
And for the last part, because of the pose she have the legs look to stiff you should bend a little her right leg to not break the movement she has on her body.
Well i hope you find this helpful 4.3/5
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I noted the pose problem and I'll try to remember it on next work. The pose is drawn straight from 3D-modelling so i thought it is perfect XD
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not all of them but most of them
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well the problem with most 3d modeling is that they turned out to stiff and tends to forget some anatomy parts
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Well... not one I'm using.
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This is really pretty!
It reminds me a lot of Ivy from Soul Calibur,especially the outfit & the haircut
Awesome job!
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Thanks!
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Cool!
I checked the SC wiki,& Ivy weighs just 2 pounds more than her!
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AH Though I do have a scrapped character which is based on Ivy x.x
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cool!
I'll check your scrapbook!
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Take your time
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Those characters look awesome!
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Very cool patterning on her clothes, andsince they aren't pictured here, what kind of weapons are "Crochets"?
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Wanted to imitate pattern symbolizing flower that time XD
Crochets (lit. fang), by ficion Chronicle definition, are twin curved short sword used by the faeries for melee combat. The twin blades can be joined at handle to form a bow that can be used as a ranged weapon. The bow uses arrow made from faerie dust, so if a faerie ran out of dust, she cannot fire the bow, thus resort to the swords for armed combat.
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Ahhhh, Like Pit's bow...
The little angel guy from Kid Icarus and more recently SSBB.
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SSBB? Super Smash Bro something something?
I dun play any of Nintendon't console
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I don't have a Wii myself... but I've briefly played and enjoyed that particular game 
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What does XD mean anyway? I mena what kind of expression or emotion translates to that exactly...
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Uhhhh, fainted? ... I can't place it from that caricature of facial expression...
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It's actually laughing with your eyes closed ^^
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Ahhh, it all makes sense now...
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Element: Darkness?
Awww...she must be evil then.
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She is one of the "protagonist" on the first chronicle
In the world of fiction Chronicles, neither element nor race can be stereotypically labelled "evil". However this is also a running gag in the story. From time to time, there's a famous "Lich Pride" bazaar where Liches (a race of undead human that severs unneeded body part, leaving them with only head, arm, upper torso, and spinal cord) show that they are good people.
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