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Description JAKUTA - Concept of energy rifle.

Concept based on usual shape of M-16. I just add „aerodynamic” look and some “wtf” parts. All cover in shine color in order not to make it too dark. (Concept, modeling and rendering is mine.) I didn’t cover it into full textures to keep attention on model itself. (And save time of course . Vray made the rest.

I did 4 pictures:

1. Front side: [link]
2. Rear side: [link]
3. Perspective: [link]
4. Tech draw: [link]


So what is your opinion? Tnx for comments if any.
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Comments: 38

Hongablaster [2013-01-20 19:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I find this is an excellent fictional weapon model. Here's how I evaluate it:

Vision: The vision will get 5 points because it is obvious that a conscious effort has been made to balance fictional parts and outlook with real-world practicality. I really appreciate this effort, i.e. to make something fictional actually look feasible and I try to do this in my designs as well despite the mountain of problems and restrain this causes. From its general shape to the tiniest of details this rifle looks really sci-fi but also really feasible, (in a fictional way).

Originality: I'll give this 4 stars (instead of 5) because of the choice to base some of its elements, mostly the stock, grip and collimating sight on existing real-world rifle models (mainly the M-4). Besides those parts, the feeling and aesthetic of this weapon is very good and original.

Technique: I'll give this 5 stars. Modelling is top-notch without being over-the-top or too "wordy". Material choice and rendering are at professional level.

Impact: I'm always on the lookout for nice vehicle or aircraft models - weapons are really second priority to me but this one not only caught my attention but it also let my imagination loose. So, I'll give this 5 stars.

My only criticism would be the choice of the laser pointer: Having a collimating "reflect" sight like the EOTech renders the laser obsolete, and more so since a laser pointer is an active device which under certain circumstances presents the danger of making the user visible before he even fires a shot.

In general this weapon manages to strike a golden spot between realism and fiction and it very successfully combines sleek and dynamic design elements. I could say that between the few dozen guns that I've encountered here on DeviantArt this is arguably one of the 3 best.

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DeutscherHerbst [2013-10-06 20:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Great work !

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templar127 [2013-06-19 04:54:16 +0000 UTC]

awesome gun!

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Ignigena-Fire [2013-03-06 05:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful design on the rifle, I like the elegant feel and look. This would be great as an energy pulse rifle or mini-rail gun. But this is awesome, a perfect example of weapons as an art form.

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VSIS [2013-03-04 00:10:07 +0000 UTC]

Just wondering...

Wouldn't it be better if the grip and the laser pointer be replaced with a different attachment? Although the grip's design looks interesting, I'm not sure if that can actually be put into a man's hands without giving him some cramps afterwords...

I also have some thoughts on the holographic sights, since it seems to be permanently attached to the rail (from this angle, I may be wrong). Wouldn't that eliminate the purpose of a rail?

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peterku In reply to VSIS [2013-03-05 14:10:49 +0000 UTC]

probably yes. next time I plan to do some with holographic attachments. it makes nice effect with light.

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Lord-Radian [2013-03-03 22:32:55 +0000 UTC]

Pekný dizajn zbrane, akože úplne si viem predstaviť ju v rukách nejakých sci-fi pancierovaných pešiakov .

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peterku In reply to Lord-Radian [2013-03-05 14:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Zdravim krajana.

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Crona27 [2013-03-03 21:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful rifle indeed.

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kyu2130 [2013-02-06 04:34:05 +0000 UTC]

the first thing that comes to mind when I see this wonderfully sculpted weapon is Battlestar Galactica. The shape of the barrel reminds me of the fighters. This is truly a wonderful model

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peterku In reply to kyu2130 [2013-02-06 08:18:21 +0000 UTC]

Battlestar galactica. I didnt see that but know him from Big Bang theory. one of main character had sexual imagination with one woman of Galactica. Funny.

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wbyrd [2013-01-25 17:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Sleek, Letha,l Imaginative, and original ..all my favorite flavors.

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peterku In reply to wbyrd [2013-01-28 07:11:36 +0000 UTC]

tnx

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SMOKEYoriginalHD [2013-01-22 14:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Suprové

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peterku In reply to SMOKEYoriginalHD [2013-01-23 17:08:50 +0000 UTC]

nazdar ako sa mas??

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SMOKEYoriginalHD In reply to peterku [2013-01-23 17:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Aaaa, šak ujde to a čo ty?

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peterku In reply to SMOKEYoriginalHD [2013-01-28 07:12:07 +0000 UTC]

nic nove. snehu ako v rusku a zima

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SMOKEYoriginalHD In reply to peterku [2013-01-28 12:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Haha, aj u nás skade si to ty?

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peterku In reply to SMOKEYoriginalHD [2013-01-28 16:41:30 +0000 UTC]

Martin. drbe to tu jak blaznive......

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SMOKEYoriginalHD In reply to peterku [2013-01-28 18:06:05 +0000 UTC]

u nás tiež sneží takto malo padať pred vianocami a nie po

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nstar5u [2013-01-21 20:58:42 +0000 UTC]

it looks so well balanced, i'd love to have an airsoft replica of this in a skirmish.

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peterku In reply to nstar5u [2013-01-22 09:31:27 +0000 UTC]

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JeanLucCaptain [2013-01-21 19:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Clint Eastwood: Damn, gotta get me one of these...

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peterku In reply to JeanLucCaptain [2013-01-22 09:32:07 +0000 UTC]

based on recent events, 1 empty chair is enough for them to beat us all

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tonare [2013-01-21 03:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Real nice job on this.

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pantophage [2013-01-20 19:26:26 +0000 UTC]

very elegant but still utilitarian look, i'm impressed

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peterku In reply to pantophage [2013-01-21 07:56:36 +0000 UTC]

tnx you

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CODCrysisWarfare [2013-01-20 15:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Where does the mag go?

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peterku In reply to CODCrysisWarfare [2013-01-21 07:56:50 +0000 UTC]

as usual in the middle at the bottom.

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CODCrysisWarfare In reply to peterku [2013-01-21 14:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh i see.

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Timotiikeri [2013-01-20 13:37:24 +0000 UTC]

That is a one GREAT looking rifle, way better than many weapons you see in movies! Good job.

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peterku In reply to Timotiikeri [2013-01-21 07:57:01 +0000 UTC]

tnx you mate.

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KnHawke [2013-01-20 05:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Before I even read the description... I was thinking, "Plasma? Particle Beam?"
Me tinks you got the right message across with this nice piece of kit

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peterku In reply to KnHawke [2013-01-20 13:02:24 +0000 UTC]

othervise I will have to sort out how to push round through triangle

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dragonkan [2013-01-20 02:59:38 +0000 UTC]

where you thinking lazer or electron beam weapon/ ect here? looks awesome

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nstar5u [2013-01-20 01:12:17 +0000 UTC]

this...this is so sexy i can barely keep it in my pants.

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peterku In reply to nstar5u [2013-01-20 13:01:34 +0000 UTC]

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dirty222 [2013-01-19 22:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Awsome, like all your weapons....

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