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Published: 2014-05-29 23:05:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 623; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 5
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James Levi Webb, rake n' scrape musician.Arthur's Town, Cat Island.
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I feel this photograph captures the subject’s emotion and character well. The detail is incredible and the depth of field works well for the image. The background gives the viewer a sense of the subject’s location and lifestyle and further strengthens the viewer’s connection with the subject yet is blurred enough to not be distracting. The subject is well positioned in terms of lighting. The subject’s expression makes me feel like he has a great sense of humor. The point of view helps make the subject look wise and respectable.
The biggest thing I feel should be adjusted is the shadow on the subject’s face. I would like to see the right side of his face with more clarity. I feel that this makes it harder for a viewer to make a connection with the subject. I also think that, to go along with the point of view, the subject would have been better positioned if the picture were composed (or cropped) so the subject’s head were a little closer to the top edge.
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Thank you for your very helpful review, I agree with everything you said except for positioning of the head which is one of the focal points of the portrait and should not be close to the edge of the frame. I will look into the dark right side of the face though. Thank you again.
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Your welcome my friend
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I think so Lawrence. 
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He looks like a very interesting character! Great portrait
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He's got that kind of weathered, seen it all face, thank you John!
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He dresses like my dad sort of, which makes him awesome
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Thank you Jenny, I think he has an interesting face too!
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The mysteries of the beard, what alien artifacts lie hidden in there?
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Peter - you're very welcome!
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