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Philosophy-Fox β€” Hiroshima
Published: 2011-12-19 04:16:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 50; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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'Mum' I heard her say
The last words of that day.
Last words of that year.
Last words of that war.
The finale was drawing near…
It was a cry of terror
A desperate scream of fear
She wanted her ma
To hold her close
Anything soothing-
A hug or a
Kiss on the nose.
But alas- the fear did
Not last. The light
Was already blinding their
Sight.
It was drawing their fate
No longer did they have to wait.
The war is over! A brighter day!
These voices only come
When the bomb is out to play.
Brought back to the present-
My thoughts did catch
The very skin ripping
From this poor girl's flesh.
Now you'd hear her cries
With tears or with her own eyes?
The blinding light finally disappeared
Whats left are bodies;
And blood that is smeared-
Over the ground the scarlet colour lays
Mixed with the fire,
A new spark ablaze.
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Comments: 12

athenagurl14 [2011-12-19 21:52:19 +0000 UTC]

My mom was reading over my shoulder, then asked me "this is your FRIEND?"
In any case, I really liked how it flowed and brought a sympathetic 'tear' to my eye.

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Philosophy-Fox In reply to athenagurl14 [2011-12-19 21:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha, your too un-serious. x3

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athenagurl14 In reply to Philosophy-Fox [2011-12-19 22:04:18 +0000 UTC]

It's a gift and a curse. What can I do...?

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thecr8tive1 [2011-12-19 20:39:18 +0000 UTC]

I also liked how you kept the rhyme too! ^_^

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Philosophy-Fox In reply to thecr8tive1 [2011-12-19 20:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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thecr8tive1 In reply to Philosophy-Fox [2011-12-19 21:02:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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thecr8tive1 [2011-12-19 20:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow O.O It flashed me back to when I watched that Hiroshima video in some class last year. It also reminded me of a book that Mrs. Cook made us read. Nice job though! It was a pretty gruesome day....

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Philosophy-Fox In reply to thecr8tive1 [2011-12-19 20:45:54 +0000 UTC]

It was indeed a bloody day then... I'm sort of glad I missed the video- it was just a little too dark for my liking. I guess the whole thing is really sad, though. Hooray, Hooray! The war is over- and death is here to stay. :/

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thecr8tive1 In reply to Philosophy-Fox [2011-12-19 21:03:21 +0000 UTC]

yea...it was a sad day for them yet a happy day for us,and then we started to realize what a horrendous thing we did to them.

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Ignas357 [2011-12-19 15:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Why do I have the feeling that this is inspired by that video XD. Nice anyway.

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Philosophy-Fox In reply to Ignas357 [2011-12-19 16:12:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha, the video was super creepy. It was a sad time, though.

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Ignas357 In reply to Philosophy-Fox [2011-12-20 16:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Pff what's more fun than being blasted away by a "mushroom"? XD

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