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I'll try to be as critical as anyone without a degree in photography would be, first thought, the shape is obviously key, but the torso isn't parallel with any other shapes so it looses any impact, perhaps if the body was roughly aligned with another vertical surface and the arms were straight. Clearly the natural body is intended to break up the straight edges, this I think is what shines most.
Colours are too unsaturated, I think there needs to be more contrast, however the background and foreground tones do work so long as the body was either lighter, darker or out of a saturated colour like a stronger skin tone or just an intense yellow, something like that.
The angle of her head seem odd/unsatisfying, perhaps if there was more depth or detail with the hair, and it looks like she's pouting as well(perhaps it's the angle), maybe the head should align with the right-angles to keep the consistency of straight lines but it does look like you've aligned her head with the vertical leg which is nice.
Personally I doesn't make me feel anything but I do really like how it doesn't give too much depth, everything looks to be on a 2D plain and I think it boarders on an anatomical study like Da Vinci's Vitruvian man. Hope that's what you were looking for; a deep study from a hypercritical art student.
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Great pose. Would be interesting to see it cropped almost in half of the current size to focus on the forms in the center.
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Very interesting. The light play matches her mood...I mean I can imagine kind of dance performed there and this picture being a just one frame of it...I like that
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Great shot !
I surprised me double checking if the foot was just pointing at the floor or touching it, and was some kind of disappointed seeing it was reaching it. I wished somehow it wouldn't have.
I guess it would have increased tension in the picture without closing the loop, just like the concrete structure do.
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There's something almost awkward about this pose that makes it so intriguing. Lovely work
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Your work is so beautiful man, I love your sense of composition, your lighting, your models, masterful pieces.
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